brendansmith
50 plus chap and the author is still torturing the mc, one of the most boring novels so far. I'm skipping some and see if it changes, but so far, it's trash
I will continue reading this ..❣️❣️ ..kinda unique story plot.. imagine being reincarnated .. its in my library .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It’s not just bad grammar but horrible spelling that makes it seem like you’re losing your brain cells reading it. I understand English is not their first language but yhey can at least put in the effort to search up the correct spelling or invest in a dictionary.
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Wow, this is refreshing. Got tired of a naive mc with a system. But why is it dropped though?? Its interesting and different than the rest so its definitely a recommended Novel. I hope this one will continue.
Come on author, few chapters at the begining already contradictive. Sigh what a shame....[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I can't even get through the first free chapters since there are so many Grammer mistakes. I came to read what could have been a compelling story but I can't find it under all the problems covering the chapter. I have stuck through something similar to this to the 1000 chapter because they at least kept the mistakes to a point where you could understand the story with out trying to decipher it.
I read the first 10 chapters and can I just say that I want to adopt Hannah as my little sister. She is just the cutest thing ever. I also like Jason and the fact that he is willing to enter a tournament which could potentilally harm him just so he can provide for his mother and sister. I find that really selfless and admirable. The writing quality could use a bit of work as there are some errors here and there, but not so much that it affects the story. Overall, great writing style, pace, and characters. Keep up the good work!
usually I only read few chapters In these types 100x or 10000x.. novels..afterthat I feel bored and quit reading.but I read whole 20 released chapters now.its s entertaining book until now.dont know about future chapters
I believe this is correct and what you deserve.
Please make sure to post more often so that you can get a higher rating and also so that more and more people will read and review your story
does anyone wonder how long are they going to keep this in the waiting list??
I have been seeing this for a month and it's still not published.
