it better then most
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
The storyline has potential but the grammar messes up the story. I read a couple chapters to see if the author will improve his/her writing. But my expectations turned up to be a failure
A story about an MMA fighter surviving during the apocalypse. He is a relatively calm protagonist with above average intelligence. Currently there is no "wow" factor but if you are looking for a solid novel to read then please give this novel a try. I can assure you that the story at least develops at an acceptable pace and there is no stupidly OP moments.
In terms of improvements, I felt that the story could have been developed and described better before progressing in each scenarios. It would be better to describe more fighting scenes utilizing their skills more often in detail so that the readers will be more curious to the type of skills available.
It would also be good to describe each of the monsters strengths and weaknesses more clearly. Maybe give some scenes where a person that specializes in strength is weak in fighting against monsters that are extremely fast.
I hope that this novel would gain more views and popularity as it is better than most novels out there.
this Is what I want when I say I wanna read something uniqueauthor all the best I am looking forward to your work thanks for writing this awesome piece of novel
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Chapter please!!!
its too forced. i mean author is putting words into characters mouth. their personality is bland. MC does not even give basic knowledge about anything. i mean i read up to 7 chapters ,i do not even know the realm sequence .
I read the book, it has potential and I just wanted to show my support as I know how difficult writing can be.Keep it up .
Very nice novel.and indeed very much intruiging since from the beginning of the story.the twists of the story makes us readers to crave for more chapters.and it goes more and more exciting to wait on what will happen next to our dearest cale.
What happen? this novel disappear on trail book. I wish this book would be selected this week.----------------------------------------------
The story plot good. I always love this kind of plot, from a pic nobody no greatness . I love his ability to remember everything upon reading. ( I hope of that ability as well..heheh).