A very enjoyable novel. Thank You!! The story is fastpace and it is fun to read. :)xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
omg comeon don't leave us at cliff hanger i want to see this dumb girl die and hope he will keep kiling her until she regret she provoke him in the first place when she try to show off think she is so "SMART"
This is a good start but I really want you to stop delaying the next chapter. I love stories that have the main character use knowledge of the future to make his life better than before. The poor to rich story line is also good as long as the main character doesn't get too rich too fast. Fast increase in strength is okay as long as the character doesn't forget to take time to learn control. It would also be okay for the MC to kill rapist, murderers, slavers, and rich assholes who take pleasure in destroying the lives of innocents in brutal and painful ways. Those that molest and brutalize children don't deserve the comfort of death. The MC should make sure to give them fates worse than death that will make readers laugh or feel satisfied.
good progress but shaky start, author is a bit extreme towards Muslims , but considering the history cant say I blame him.
I recommend the book go ahead.
It is a good story I like everything about it apart from the harem part I really think he should only stay with Yomi or it will ruin the story
Trash tier novel read it on novelhall for free but it's the typical trope. mc is the worst beta
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It was really well writen i feel as thinthe begining went a little fast in some parts but the points all came through nicely overall great story cant wait for the continuation
This is good novel with fast paced, highly recommend..............,...,.....................................................................
Damn, why do Web novel always choose "trash novel"
Review based on the 1st Chapter.
Good job to the Translator and Editor. The chapter feels very well translated and with few errors. The first chapter seems quite interesting with the world set up and the surprising realistic behavior of the MC. MC doesn't seem to be a beta which is more than I can ask for.
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