Read up to chapter 15, normally I don't quit so early but the MC is just annoying. Acting like he is at the pinnacle when he is only at the starting line. Doesn't matter if he has all this knowledge, if you are a small fish acting like a shark in a big pond, well you should get eaten for your efforts. Not smart story telling, more like this guy is living through his own dreamscape.
Really bad discount Budda PalmMC supposedly transmigrated, but has no motivations at all. He acts and thinks like he is on a holiday trip, he also just knows things and has things just on hand whenever it is convenient for the story.
The author have a stinky mouth, who can't accept feedback there's so many reviews with low stars are deleted to keep this novel have a high rating.
he keeps fighting with reader can't receive opinion. so overall 1.0
So I ask everyone to ignore the bad reviews as those have been resolved and should no longer be relevant thank you to everyone who put up with the original version and followed me to the new one hope you all have a blessed day
This is a cooking novel with a system. The story is very light-hearted and the system doesn't make the MC OP. From what I've read, this is always the case with Chef systems. It's necessary to let the reader's know that cooking requires lots of practice, experience, etc!!!!
I don’t know where to start. I guess I should with the most pressing issue, the translation.
Review from chapter 39, I’m not a fan.
Apparently it was translated by the same people/person that translated ‘The Tycoon God of Online Gaming’. But at least there, it was tolerable. I don’t know if it was the quality of translation or the story, but it might be the latter.
Ok, the story. The story is kind of everywhere right now and they don’t go much into detail about the main character and his problems. They only do an overview of it before continuing the story and the bad translations don’t help. They mention other parties but never explain who they are as more parties keep appearing. There are maybe 4-6 different groups of people that are mentioned and I only know stuff about like 2 of them. The other ones seem to be foreshadowing or something but they have only been mentioned once or twice before someone else appears.
If you read already I’m talking about the guys who aimed to steal the box, the person who has a boss and the guy who set up the evolution thing and may marry the boss, and the wolves. Those are just some of them.
The last one, the wolves are kinda acceptable because it was near the end of the 39 chapters and you get to know a little bit but even then, the author tried to hide every single character behind the scenes with a mysterious mist that ruins the story progression because theres too many of them. It’s also really confusing.
And to where the story is headed, not really sure. Just join games and get stronger I’m guessing while all this other stuff happens around him.
Ok the writing, as in, the way things play out. Not talking about the story but how fights scenes go and interactions are. They are okay. They may have been slightly changed because of the translations but the humor and the way the main character interacts with other characters and NPCs, is meh.
The main characters personality is pretty normal. Oh you want to kill me? Hah! I’ll kill you. Spare you? Nah. He has a hint of arrogance, only a hint, and a lot of energy. Like a stereotypical YouTuber.
Basically, I don’t like it, not how the writing goes or the way the author is making things play out. There are certainly others who likes this novel, I’m not one of them.
Have a good day, peace.
So far, good. Keep it up~
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So good! I love thw soft hearted hero and his little sister. They make the perfect duo in learning how to play a traditionally kill or be killed game in a non-violent manner!
Grammer is terrible idk why people said the authors english was good, this is torture just can't stand it. Story is ok if cliche but feels forced when author breaks the 4th wall all the time.
Thanks for uploading or translating the volume, also hoping that you would also post the 11.5. Thank you!
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The story is good and interesting i would have continue to read if not of the quality of the writing, which obviously just translated straight from a translator with no editing done to it, which is not really a smart move.I’m giving you a 2 star for now, if there is any improvement i will personally remove this review with a new one to review the improved one.Good luck
very nice novel, it's just that during the whole reading time I got so depressed that I even refused to eat fried chicken.You realize !!This story is so existing but at the same time very depressing.Reminds me of Li Qiye