The premise is cool but the MC kills this story. In chapter one the MCs best friend says he acts like 15 year old. In a playful manner. False. Take that as a fact!
The MC acts like a 13-15 year old ****. Someone who lacks the life experience of a 30. Which the MC claims to be. What makes it worse is that the MC knows about stores and games that have a fantasy setting but freaks out about everything.
This is a wasted book with a very annoying MC.
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Interesting novel!but I prefer male lead than female lead though.but at the very least this novel is different from the other FL novels.so I tried reading this and yeah I think it's good ?. I just stop to give a review and this novel deserve a 5 star ⭐. and I hope the author can update more chapters in the near future?. anyways I'll stop here. I will continue reading first. さよなら!
even after 10chI was looking forward to reading the kingdom building nd wars. but I don't even get eased into our ml returning to his territory before a female shows up to insert herself into the novel. I'm turned of from the potential most likely partner?? of our ml. like maybe if you have eased into potential candidates once I have built repoire with my ml I can be okay with it. but the mf starts out witha damsel in distress, that the ml saves, and his lust? and her throwing her body to him to save her issue irks me. I mean the ml tried to put his foot down and not go that route , but they end up doing it don't know each other she brings nothing to our ml but family issues , she's not even strong so what..... y do I have to read about their ship before he actually works on his territory or fights a war. uhhhhhh , it turned me off so bad so gotta rate 2/5. you may not like like my review, but thebwriting seems promising and if you can get past what i didn't like that the ml didn't even settle and he is thrown into a forced union then u can continue past. but author if you had let the readers build rejoice with the ml, see the personalities more of the potential love intrest I wouldn't have been so turned off. and she may be written as a supportive , good wife potential but the first encounter was bad.
Basically this is America or somewhere not in china. But somehow is like China. MC gained a OP ability that is close to omniscient or Omnipresent, he uses it to take revenge but not how to cure is vegetables state girlfriend. He thinks that having enough physical strength put him above everyone. This novel setting is in the Modern Era and yalk know that in the Modern Era no matter how strong you are physically you cant beat somehow with Money and Influence. He also cheated on his girlfriend. Doesnt matter what excuse he give, he still cheated on his girlfriend. The World Background of this novel is very lacking Character design is very lacking as well. Story development is lacking as wellIdk care about the updating stability because i dropped this abomination Translation is very trash as well.
I don't think it will be choosen but this novel is better than the other novels in trials it has relatively good progress mc didnt become op in the 20 or 40 chapter i didnt see deep world building but i think its okay for now translating and writing quality has no problem so in the end i hope for this novel to be chosen
Good novel give it a chance it's about a mc with low talent getting transmigrated without a cheat. Only problem I feel is the unnecessary hype surrounding mc mysterious situation. I just read a fanfic where the author created hype about MC's father and didn't reveal him. And when the father finally got revealed, it was disappointing (he was revealed in ch 150).
hidden gem of webnovel, fluffy is my god now btw. Love this novel, give it a change you will be hooked in 5 chapters it is amazing. I have only ever seen 1 cliche, no romance so far, mc is awesome and each character has their own backstory and plot which is enjoyable.
come from chapter one and im here to say I lost braincells reading those insults, author please fix them?
Nice, I like it but please don't drop it
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~30~ Chapters review.
Why should you start reading this book? Because it's great of course!
More seriously, I've read the other books of our dear author, so here is what I can tell you:
- Author knows what he is doing, it's not his first shot. - Author knows how to write a novel in a more than DECENT ENGLISH and his writing is FLUID, things that unfortunately very few webnovels can boast about, especially in early chapters
- Over the last few years, author has proven that he was capable of publishing multiple chapters daily. He won't disappear or go on a 6-months hiatus.
- 1chap/day will probably increase in the near future after the author finishes one of his other books.
If you like eastern fantasy, give a try to his other books, they are great, not flawless but they will entertain you!
Now, what about THIS novel?
I had some reservations about the 'system' tag because I find that systems in novels more often than not remove agency from the mc, make his growth unnatural and authors don't know how to balance that later in the story.
So I'm relieved that this is a 'light system' so far, it is not some godlike entity granting op bonus only to our mc.
Mixing evolution, system, apocalypse, and cultivation is a breath of fresh air!
I hope author will find the right balance throughout the novel. It reminds me of 'The Oracle Paths' a little bit, but the two novels are still very different.
Characters are compelling, no major flaw there so far. I don't think there will be any harem.
I hope author will introduce more side characters not existing only through our mc, the very best novels also shine thanks to their original side characters, I know that it's sometimes hard to balance as the story still has to focus on one mc.
I wish that our mc will continue to grow differently compared to the mcs from the author's other books, we readers like variations in our characters' personality.
Overall this has been a very enjoyable 30 chapters read, I recommend everyone to give it a try, you won't regret it!
This novel has the potential for top 10, I'm certain of it.
PS: I hope Dyon can work faster, Dimensional Descent also needs 3 chapters a day!