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It's pure 100% crap, the writing quality is so bad I can't even stand the thought of reading the whole story, everything is really bad for ex. The author writes stuff written down redundantly ITS VERY REDUNDANT, I bet the author's vocabulary is comparable to a 12 year old child, sometimes the author tries to be smart and writes "high vocab" words but fail miserably, I mean it doesn't match with
The stuff She/he writes down it is completely unbalanced. My point is Don't Read This Shit
Translation quality is low. Make sure to keep space between words.It is too troublesome to read like this. I somewhat interested in this story but the poor quality editting gives me headache................
This story is terrible. The MC is ridiculously stupid despite being a beggar and gets even dumber after learning magic. BS’s his way through everything with no real goal in sight with just as bad companions. There is no consistency or thought put into the novel like he gets hit by a book that is 1 metre wide and half a metre thick, that book would kill him because it’s so heavy. Place names got mixed up like it was the Myer continent and them the Metalhin or what ever his family name is continent. Just don’t read, licking the pavement would be more enjoyable than reading this.
Good book. I especially like author notes at the end of chapters. Unfortunately there is one big problem and it's that author often use 'him' on wrong gender same with 'her', which is quite annoying.
Great book thus far, author takes care to go back and edit if needed instead of just authors notes later. Great choice in music references and easy to get into and flow is smooth. Overall a very good read. Looking forward to the rest of the book.
Good story..........."..................................................................... Writing quality great stability of story good everything is good so far
Story is pretty interesting. The beginning kind of gave me a philosophical vibe. However, elaborate more on certain scenes so that it amplifies the atmosphere. Keep it up. Keep uploading ?
Shameless brother of author here??.
Now on a serious note. To say the truth I love this book, many of you will say obviously you are his brother but to say the truth I never read his first book which he has deleted now
This is one of the books I follow I love the fact that the MC is not so OP but still stronger than most
Also I'm a big fan of system, well you guys and girls should at least try and read it
Peace and goodbye✌?
Nice start n different from the cliche one's. Don't drop it pls
love this story, always a highlight of my day when I see it's notification pop up. Author, I truly appreciate all your effort you put into your work.
its typical everyone hates China but then China beats everyone. It's the horrible mass produced Chinese ego stroking books that idk why keep getting made when from what I can see they never last long at all.
the story has a good start which was unexpected ...but who is the ml , does anyone knows
