The book has a very unique start to it and it had me grasped since the very beginning.Also, I really like the conversations that Aarav has with himself and I enjoy the moments when the fourth wall is broken and the conversations feel more like between Aarav and myself rather than Aarav and himself.I also like how every character has been given distinctive qualities and how enough emphasis is layed upon each one of them and I'm enjoying the banter between this group as it does feel nostalgic and very true to life.Personally, being from India myself, it feels a bit easier to relate to the terminologies used in this novel and I can assure anyone reading my comment/review as a way to understand whether this is for you or not, then don't worry, understanding these terms are easy and can be easily googled and most are explained by the author himself.Bringing this to an end, I'm enjoying the way this story is picking up momentum, I like the friendships being depicted here, the quarrels between siblings and the very relatable protagonist for this story.Keep up the good work, author.Also, I'm satisfied with the upload frequency as I anyway end up reading it all over the weekend.
It's a dungeons and dragon(DND) novel. Mc plays a game under Call of Cthulhu (CoC) settings which means it's the hardest difficulty. The turn off is how strictly they are making it DND with stat checks and dice rolls for every action. I couldn't recommend this unless you really like DND because it's not really immersive.
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This book.isn't for me.the prologue is too long.and i thought that there was a japanese vibe going on.unfortunately the author.did not capture.that vibe.as for the structure of the story it's bland.and boring. and very VERY scripted.i can't feel the emotions of the characters it's as if it is forced. the personalities of the characters is also forced. your grammar is somewhat tolerable but know how to use proper words in a sentence. as well as proper commas and periods. NOT JUST THAT but fix the broken words of the sentences those are making me cringe so much. i was excited when i saw this book but my excitement turned into instant dissapointment. i also read what the author said. you apologise for your mistakes but your apology doesn't validate.to anything if you don't fix it.Your writing just lacks.professionalism.i'm sorry to say. it's as if.a kid wrote it. and yet a children's book is more fun than this.i rarely give.5.0 star but to those who earned and deserve it.right now.this book is 2-3 stars in my view.
good plot, but there are so many things we dont get explained and he just randomly gets things from the system that we dont know of. and when there is a problem for the MC like build a car, and he just dose it even when he dosent have the necessary tools. and he says he dosent have superpowers yet he can teleport and delete memories (not superpowers but like it) but i like the plot so im gonna continue reading
there are still a few concepts that i can never wrap my head around. yet, i recognise a good story when i see one. i may not like what i read so far, but it is a gripping tale for sure.