the story was good at first, but the MC don't act like a thousand years old person. i mean you are in a different universe what is the first thing you will do? obviously find more information, but go in a game he know nothing about not even the Basics. someone with thousands years of experience should know how important information is. human are in top of world because of their intelligence and that how they made cultivation possible in this part of the story, should not he know at least that?
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sh1ties novel ever , the story is all jumbled together its barley understandable in the story line and the chapters is like a couple of ords thats it nothing more and nothing less.
While the premise of the story is not too bad, it is a trope. The MC is definitely OP, and wears his plot armour valiantly.
The biggest deterrent to a better score would have to be that of the latest 60 chapters (as of chp 3157), over 50 of them havehad the "second half" (or so) of the text copypasted from either the first half of the chap, or almost the entire previous chap. and despite the comments to the author, it has been continuing.
From chapter 100 onward it switches from a decent translator to machine translation and becomes a garbage mangled mess, bit of a shame as I was quite liking it until that point. I just can't rate mtl as anything higher than 1 star, it gives me a headache to even try reading it
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I'm not usually a fan of cultivation novels and the sort, but I won't lie, there's something about this book that is quite intriguing. I love your writing style and how simple your sentences are. I can tell that you paid a lot of attention to your spelling and grammar. I hope that you're novel gets more recognition. Honestly, keep up the good work [img=recommend]
My Two-sided Cultivation: Starting From Collecting Experiences
MTL, Chaps:261.
every chaps are same so you don't have to read to find where of Webnovel you Left.
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If you were trying to read The Lord’s Empire and felt it lacking, this is the story for you since this is basically what it was inspired by, if I recall properly. The skill development, cultivation, npcs, allies, villains, every aspect of the game system are ALL better.
I read this one first, so I couldn’t stomach The Lord’s Empire hand-wavey way of doing things. This is a good MC that works for his advantages and plans ahead. He’s smart, hard-working, and puts in a lot of effort to be a loyal friend. He’s also not fake humble or even pretending to be magnanimous, while actually being black-bellied. He’s a good person who just wants to build the best future possible for his family at all costs.
It’s also nice that not every woman is placed in the novel to chase after him and stroke his ego by being face slapped. Everyone is pretty reasonable in comparison to most novels like this. You can understand why people are the way they are. The only person that might be annoying in the whole novel is the sister, and that’s just because she’s a Mary Sue, but she also 8, so whatever, I guess. She’s not in every chapter so it’s tolerable!
I only got to around chapter 357 ish? Before I paused. I think I burnt myself out a little bit? The story is more technical than some other stories and is really focused on territory stuff, and sometimes that just isn’t what I’m in the mood for. HOWEVER, that doesn’t make it a not good novel. It is amazing at everything it sets out to do.
TLDR: it’s great! And has very few plot holes in the novel minus when it comes to the Mary Sue sister. 10/10 great MC, great cast, great rivals, great system!
If you have any questions or need something explained feel free to ask! I really enjoy the story and it being here makes mobile reading much easier than GT because of the ad glitches.
Wonderful is good novel nice one good story good experience good character good design good background good story development good writing quality world background good overall nice good work
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