Lucien121oOx
It's definitely a quick with less clutter. No nonsense what so ever. Addictive and no lousy side characters. Including no filler also. It's a bonus for me
I absolutely recommend this to everyone who wants something new to read and it got 800+ chapters ongoing in raw so we're not gonna run out of chapters to read anytime soon . Honestly i really hope it goes over 2000+ chapters before it ends . ありがとう ございます
This is my first review so forgive my inexperience. To begin let's talk about the world background. After years of fighting against each other, the four great races (Humans, Orcs, Light Elves, and Dark Elves) decided that instead of destroying the world in their wars, they would create a pact. This pact restricts wars between the four races in the real world, moving their battlefield to the virtual world. They created a game called "Project: Unknown" to host these battles. Our MC has just turned 16, which is the age humans are initiated to play "Project: Unknown". Background reminds me of a book called "Insignia".
So far, I haven't really come across any big problems in terms of the story, albeit we are only seven chapters in. The MC hasn't been shown to be a skilled fighter (Hasn't been in any combat yet, though he did spend a little over a month learning to use all beginner weapons against wooden dummies), nor has he been shown to be a great tactician. He has however, been shown to have great patience, he spent a month practicing with the beginner weapons, and then worked in a mine for a little over two-weeks. (1.5 - 2 months of play and he's still at level 1)
The only problem I would say I have with this novel would be the grammar. To me the grammar isn't too big a problem since you can still get the intended meaning from the lines, sometimes you might even get a good laugh out of the mistakes.
I feel like this novel can be a good read so I'm going to stick with it for now and see where it goes.
The story is very fast paced, sometimes it is even hard to keep up. The writing is just average, characters are all idiots, they remind you of monkeys who evolved into humans. Plot is somewhat promising but faling to use the potential.
This is really good and well written. This gives the same vibes as the original and the MC is similar to Fang Yuan but still has his own uniqueness. I really like the fact that he has better luck than Fang Yuan who had to go against the world which is typical for eastern fics. Over all I enjoyed this and hope you keep it up.
Good.
Love the concept and idea. no one ever uses Otsutsuki clan XD
keep up the writing, it is nice and smooth, and it is hard for me to find a nice fan fic. this classifys as good for me
so keep up good work XD
I was reading a story, but really I was watching an epic action packed movie being played out before my eyes! Loved how well developed the characters are as well as the world they're apart of. A definite endorsement to keep reading, I know I will ;)
Writing Quality : Good englishStability of Updates : It's free 5 star 'cause i don't care about stability bs Story Development : i drop at chap 111 i won't spoil but you **** your story like all the character development you did on Rezar seem to be useless....Character Design : Most character apart from priest seem robotic and are pretty bad like the so-called princess acting all important while she clearly overstep her postion a lot ( chap 111 i just want to smash her ) World Background : Pretty innovative and cool Anyway i drop i really like the idea but you make it seem so bad with how the story happen and the character any way good luck and it wasn't for the world background and the the free 5 star the story would be pretty much only value 3.5 star. Good luck with your story. for me it's the end
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