In the blub/summary; "I'm native English, you won't find better grammar on this site."***Smash cut to multiple grammatical errors in that same blub.***Maybe the Author shouldn't lie through their teeth eh?
it is a great novel keep up the good work bro I hope you will upload it completely it has become my favorite novel ??????????????????
This is crazy, I feel that the story goes slow and fast at the same time, there are some gaps in the plot of the story but they have an Explanation with other facts, the creativity with which the author reads this is unique
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This book is like an mmorpg but in real life with high stakes like death,in this story we follow a young talented kid named aren who goes in as a person in poverty but quickly excels in the new world he is in where he fights monsters and does quests to level up,in most mmo style games youll chose a class but in this everyone gets to choose from three paths that were chosen because they were suitable for the person every path is unique so you wont find two people with the same abilities i could go on but we would be getting into spoiler territory if I did so ill stop here thank you for reading.
I have never known such a funny and cool building system book before, I find it really amusing how Ye Chan and Ran Xuan interact. this book is a lot of fun.
Great story, contains a motive and sub motive all the time. Writing skills need improvement but I can see it better over time, keep up the good work.
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A new book that will blow your socks off. I guarantee you. It's a reincarnation/transmigration fantasy book. The beginning is good, the story line is interesting, the characters are well written, the grammar is good too. Looking forward to more chapters.
This is a poorly thought out cross between video games and bad xanxia.
To give an example, the MC runs around murdering hundreds of spirit animals to the point that there aren't anymore in a large area and earns millions for doing it. Yet somehow, none of the other powerful cultivators (say the hundreds/thousands of them that are a stage above him) think to do the same because...video game logic.
The translation isn't the worst I have seen on Webnovel but it is bad. The numbers on the MCs stat page are regularly wrong, numbers rarely add properly, sentences are horrible to read at times and so on.
The MC is ... not good. He has no issues killing monsters or people as soon as he sees them because ... I have no idea. He has no training for it but somehow he is just a murderhobo from day 1. He also does a ton of dumb things that are typical xanxia MC which make so much less sense in this world. His only friends are beautiful young women. I could go on but it isn't good.
I really can't recommend this one.
Intrigued. Excited to see more.
I started reading not too long ago only at chapter 7. the only thing so far I can judge is your grammar. everything else seems fine and is building up. I also know the first volume is a prologue sort of thing however the grammar just gives me headaches to understand what you're trying to write. I hope the author can fix this problem or at the least edit it a bit more and improve as the story goes on