Story is meh, interactions are forced.
Fir example: bold agent guy says your wife is a fox spirit.
MC be like: Okay.….
Bold agrnt guy: that dude is too clam send more people to observe him!
Bold dude’s Boss then is like: He is not ordinary so therefore we must recruit him!
I can see the strings in this novel so I’ll give it a One star in Story development
Character design is meh so 2 stars.
World background is 1 star as the spirit group government agency is like the rest of the novel is very poorly thought
out.
This is outragous, this is unfair✌
Well I don't have anything to say except that you should absolutely give a try to this novel. Its amazing
Writing Quality: Good writing quality that is rare on this app. Could be better with more realistic/mature dialogue, but I guess that is a personal preference since some people are into characters who act like ten year olds so still five stars.
Updating Stabibility: Good.
Story Development: Interesting plot. Bad world building that throws you in without proper build up.
Character Design: Horrible characters. Attempts to make a cold main character, does this extremely poorly. Main reason I dropped this. Would be better with a shounen tag and a more generic shounen personality as author’s style seems tailored to shounen.
World Background: Interesting, needs better buildup
Overall: Interesting plot, poor execution. Recommend making a shounen protagonist for future novels. Would recommend to people interested in shounen type novels, just not my personal taste.
One of the worst stories I've ever read ..
The author tried to copy the idea of Overlord and Everyone is a returnee to make something he never explained.
He doesn't explain ANYTHING in detail . He never explained lvl's . He started saying lvl 100 was the max and then made it clear 4 episodes later that there is no maximum lvl .
Mc nows that the world will be filled with monsters and he can avoid it if he stays long enough but he just jumps of the train too early ( the dungeon was frozen in time so is like 1 second outside )
Author confirms MC is immortal but he just leaves the leveling area too soon ... NO ONE would say no to lvl up having the opportunity to have magic and many more cool things. I would at least stay 50 years.
Also MC says he should have chozen magic in stead of swords ( which is true , magic is 1000 better than swords ) and he didn't used the SP point properly to balance magic at all until the end.
Resume : Author tried his best but words are set in a way that made me dizzy and In my honest opinion I think this is rubbish.
KillerHemboy is back! He posted an update in this novel. He might continue this novel at the beginning of 2022. idk. Just glad to know he's not dead.
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It's cool to find a tree that holds a different world out there. Though both worlds the MC lives in are all waiting for war. Too much conflict, isn't it?
Writing is good but needs editing. Update is accordingly done. Pace is relative. MCs are brothers, right? But I haven't read yet about Goshi's Yin wielder brother yet. He was mentioned in the synopsis. World setting elaborately described.
Great start!
Amazing plot and character's design is dope. I will rate you 5 stats this time.
I am one of your biggest fans on your old book. The God level mage. Can't wait to see how this story will go!
mc gets cucked lol ... reviews get deleted well kinda obvious with only 20..............................,.....................................