This is indeed a good story! It got a good plot and good smut! Such a gem! I never expected this novel to be good! I think the characters are good and I can't pin point Wharton this novel but you can really tell that it got a weight on it (?) it snot just a pure smutty novel with a slapped plot here and there! Truly an interesting one!
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Sad was not picked.. crazy picking system for novels.. it was really a great novel.lots of fun.. mc was not arrogant and has brains not like other op mc.. they should have picked this rather than those trash novels that were picked.. so annoying
Very interesting story. The place and situation is clearly described. While reading, I keep on asking my self "what is happening?" and "waaaa." It keeps me curious.
theres no emotion or depth, its very bare. every chapter needs more. the chapter i just read "killers" felt flat. he broke their arms and legs, and chased after the ones who ran away just breaking their legs and disarming them. then sophia called the police and they left. that isnt word for word. but its pretty close. no fight scene. no drawn out police questions. the way it reads it was over in less than 5 minutes from start to them leaving. you could double or possibly even triple the length of this book with details.
Extremely good, in a single day it became one of my favorites on webnovel. Will definitely drop power stones here..........................
wow this is a talented writer.The story setup and plot is great I read chapter one thinking it will be about this family who moved and started a life got new friends.Thought it be like a typical love story.But then I paged and realized the title is exactly what it says it is Dark honor, Honouring loyality with distrust this is a great book!!!!!!!!!
Author here giving a slightly biased review to help get the ball rolling as well as clarifying a few details.1) Since English is my first language the grammar and quality of writing is more than readable however, I will make mistakes so please point them out, always appreciate grammar catchers ?2) Regarding the issues with the MC I'd like to clarify that regardless of his intelligent or how old his body portrays him to be, he is still a new born. His personality hasn't had a chance to develop and all his emotions are new. He's similar to a child, innocent, curious and prone to exaggerated emotions i.e. may be similar to those cliché Japanese protagonists however that is only in the beginning.3) Many people have stopped reading the novel, both on web novel and royal road after the first few chapters mainly due to the MC and FMC quirks and they leave comments detailing as such. I would like if you could give the novel a chance, read at least the first dozen or so chapters before casting judgement as the quirks of the MC are rounded off as he develops (less cheesy). If after that you still don't find it to your taste, fair enough.For the story itself I feel that it's well built, with rich character progression and a diverse world.The story although called Dungeon of Niflheim is not solely about dungeons. It follows the dungeon core itself and his adventures within the world of Nova. There will be dungeon building and dungeon battle elements but they won't really shine until later in the story.
I like everything. I don't care about the grammar because I read worse (Chinese fanfic and translated through Google translate) and so all well interesting idea and yes I also do not know English well. But the piece itself is good
I am still reading it but the plot development, pace, character buildup is very well written and i will read other works from this author too
Trial read was a fun and interesting to read(up to ch 40) Definately recommended
The "villian" is very nice as to even try to have a fair competition with MC
The 5 star review is made based on what I read from trial read(ch40). whatever happens afterwards in the story is something else. If you want spoilers(that may ruin your interest), continue reading.
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You can find the rest of this translated under the same name on MTL(not great quality but eh its mtl)
I haven't exactly read it but the rating was pretty bad. Based on the reviews, the story will fall off due to forced plot or something. Also, after like chapter 40, the story revolves around MC going into the entertainment industry. It last until chapter 100+
MC will supposedly "cheat" on FL according to the people who left reviews at the end. System will be less and less relevant to the point it is rarely mentioned later on. Around 3 love interests via the end.
(Again, read if you want, dont take everything I've written too seriously. Different readers, different taste in novels. Besides, lots of novels will be heavily critiqued, hard to actually find a good one via reviews and ratings. Good Luck Have Fun Goodbye)
This story plus your imagination