it's Amazing, author has the creativity, a unique system, a unique world. However, the pace of the cultivation is slow. it's 90 chapters in and the main character hasn't progressed much. There are seven relams and each has its own stages. If this pace continues to go on, then it will take more than 2000 chapters to complete it. Author is writing another novel also, not sure if he will be able to complete this work.
It would be nice if you could go through and make sure that all the chapters are in the right order, Please.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Extremely good, in a single day it became one of my favorites on webnovel. Will definitely drop power stones here.
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This is a very interesting and promising concept that has a lot of potential. Its written in a loght tone with lots of jokes and memes but that doesn’t detract from the story but suits it. hopefully this Is updated continuously as im interested in seeing where it can go
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This is so underrated I love it just wish their were more chapters looking forward to the douluo dalu arc please update more often love your work author-San
Hi, I personally think it's a really enjoyable story!I'm not sure how to describe it, but the jargon that you're using sets me in the world fast. Really nice stuff instead of spelling it out, haha!By the way, how did you come up with the name Orphelia? I really like the ring to it!
Hmm, Author, we need more chapters, at least two chapters a day; I never read something interesting in a while, Aka waiting for a chapter to drop, but Take your time, King, to make the chapters better even though they are good now, Also Hope the pace of the story continues like this.Take care.
I'm on around 100 chapters in and sad that i dont have any more fast passes, especially cause i have some genre passes that i feel should work on it, like, fantasy, but anyways:Love the story, the characters and the system. The fact that there is someone overlooking them and we do know he is making the system fair is interesting, the main character does act more like an outcast and monster but still goes by his morals. There is only one person he cares about and i like that cause it would be a shame that he has no one who knows him from before and is on his side, i like it when there is someone to be shocked. I like the fact that most people do see him as a monster but some just respect his strength (specifically one character that i like) but still get disgusted by some of his inhumane actions. The story so far is entertaining and i hope it stays that way. There are things to look forward to and characters you want to meet that you are just told about they exist and a bit more info for why they matter. Personally i feel the story is just right and don't really see anything bad with it.Now just wanna say this for those checking the comments before they go read it, I think it is worth giving a chance and yes, one of the monsters is gonna be with the MC. I don't mind it, in fact i like monsters and half monsters half humans but i do know some people complained in the comments so if you don't like those, you don't have to read it. I do gotta say that the relationships in this novel do not feel that forced, especially because quite a lot is fleshed out and/or explained. If something isn't, the Author will answer comments so you can ask him. This is another thing that i love about it, the Author does check the comments and, quite often, answer them. Highly recommend reading it and good job to the Author.
Very good book overall (at least in the earl phase) ,good development, not many errors in the grammar as well,it's kinda like a system story but without one ,the book is interesting, can't wait for more.
Hello Everyone,Please give this novel a read if you enjoy the following in a story:OP MCFast PacedCultivation ComedyI will try my best to consistently update the novel at least once per day.
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