I like it as how the MC doesn't just go about helping random people like a hero and how he focuses on what is important
one of the best apocalypse book in my opinion
hope it doesn't get dropped
An endless supply of arrogant young masters.
I'm 20 chapters from finishing the raw material, so I can probably give a solid opinion. Summing up an interesting start to a subsequent tedious development, this flaw is very similar to novels of the same type, such as "48 hours a day", due to the paradigm shift and the different MC time flow, we end up seeing an apathetic main character.
During the chapters that he is with the family you can observe him with feelings, but this is forced by the author, if you spent decades or centuries living as a monarch, sect leader, mercenary or anything else, you would immediately be able to recover your previous behavior and all feelings towards your family? Certainly not and this is one of the novel's biggest flaws.
In addition, it is essential to point out a lack of worldwide development, 300 chapters and are practically the same -_-, if you expect development of secondary characters give up, due to the speed that it changes from one world to another it is basically impossible to develop a character deeply.
But although this criticism, it is still a decent story compared to the other webnovels put on trials in previous times, the MC is not an asshole, we have a wide variety of cultivation systems, without harem and lastly an enemy that although it makes the story goes fast, makes us observe several worlds of cultivation.
Probably the best fanfic I've ever read.
5* on everything except the translation (which sucks big time!)
Unfortunately it seems to have been left at around chapter 240 here, u can read the rest on MTL (just Google search it, you'll see comrademao.mtl link).
Has some really interesting uses of some mons (especially Tyranitar who has been given some powers of Groudon). Use of Psychic is pretty impressive too.
A little slow on the flow but none the less it's still a good start to a novel. The characters are interesting and intriguing. please pick and update
Very unique plot, also lowkey, there is a constant suspense of wether the mc will be able to keep this person he cherish with him or not, it draws you to keep reading to find out what is going to happen, it has very good potential!
The development of the story is going well.i am hoping that this story will go on nicely. Really nice development. I think the contents also will be nice . The story is making me curious to see what's going to happen next. So I would like to rate it 5 out of 5 . Because it is really eye catching. And the cover does not stand with the story background for some reason. I think it is also some twist. I will stay with this story and see what's going to happen
judging from the last sentence, you already know its trash....................................................................................
I didn't read this and I probably won't but the title and synopsis is hilarious .....................................................................................................
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The story is fresh. Though it started as a presentation of a teens perspective at the start but as the story progresses, the perspectives grow deeper and deeper. The more you read, the more entrigued you become. Since it's hard to anticipate what will happen next. The story teller used technique that brings you to the mind of a character. You cannot wait when and how the lives of the characters will entertwine.
Though Aiden is the main character, but the other characters are equally colorful. It's exciting when the character of the vilain will be finally revealed. Though it's too early to judge the technical ability of the author but he is very effective in presenting introspection which gives depth and color.
Found this a bIt too late, author already demoralized :(. hopefully author comes back. I got really absorbed into reading it, I really liked it. Plz Come back author i want to see how the mc grows.