An okay story. Irks me that all the chapters that I've read before are suddenly locked and I have to use my points up just to re-read whatever I can't remember. Absolute pain in the arse.
The story itself is very good (SRSLY, READ IT NOW. NOW), but I have a few bones to pick with the physics.
Now, I know the powers are srsly great and unpredictable, but the thing is, I like to think. And one day, I thought about Matcha's power(not a spoiler, this is literally 2-3 chapters in), which is stopping time. When he does so, he can punch other cats. And I read, speechless, that they could survive! Now, let me explain.
You know how to calculate speed, right? It's
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i have being searching a little for the mix in the mc's students
The world of HN1F is a mixture of the altered worlds of Battle Through the Heavens, Perfect World, Xian Ni, Transcending the Nine Heavens, another book and the author’s own creations. In this book, you will see characters based off of characters from these novels such as Xiao Yan, Shi Tian Hao (Shi Hao) and other such characters. The beginning of this novel should be treated as a sort of parody to these novels. Once the MC gathers his 4 disciples, the story will then start moving along it’s own plot line and this is when the story truly starts. You will still see some familiar events related to the characters except a bit altered, but the overall plot and story will be centered around the author’s own original plot
Writing quality: Good! Little to no error.
Good sentencing and paragraphing. Translator also explain the chinese reference.
Story development: The premises is good but the delivery and execution is bad. Mc lack braincells sometimes...
Character design: They're only so so. Like I said above, mc sometimes lack braincells. I hate the part even knowing that the hoe in the wh*re houe is using him and stuff, he still want to go there. There are some similar things but yeah....
World background: Not bad, the premises like I said is interesting, not new but still rare. They're in a murim and a cultivation world together.
Overall: I don't recommend investing yo ressources in this but if you want a quick read, sure go for it. It coulda been so much better if a lil bit more effort had gone into it but it is what it is
.... I can't bring myself to keep reading only got up to the end of ch 9 but this says it all for me a godly wasted talent and a cookie cutter swordsman
first: I will say that the author of this work is a degenerate schoolboy. second: there is a constant mention of the Canon in the novel(I read up to Chapter 20). but the constant mention of the nirazu Canon was not correct (for example, Jasmine was found on the mountain behind the Xiao clan. for Jasmine there were no pursuers because she killed everyone, and the goddess received her own poison). third: why should all the characters be given the appearance of other people? the appearance of the characters has already been shown in pictures, and then in manhwa. four: too many Grand pianos. the behavior of the characters is not realistic, not canonical, and especially not like Chinese cultivators. the hero's actions are stupid and meaningless. the narrative jumps like a mountain goat with a mental disorder. as a result, this is not a fan fiction on a Chinese work. a mockery of a good novel by the hands of this author. still davlenie Japanese ****. only inserts from the original and the world itself are similar to the style of Chinese works, and so on and so forth. my rating is 2/10. did not put 1 only because of the original world of atg and ideas with the addition of bleach. the implementation of the idea is just terrible.
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Premise seems interesting, would like to see how it goes
Honestly at this point any CN novel has nationalism so it doesn't really bother me, it shouldn't be too annoying
Indeed the best novel in this cycle, there are a few places with weird wording, but overall it is readable.
At the moment it looks like a slice of life of an immortal, which is observing, learning, becoming stronger with everything at hand, seems pretty reasonable as it is simply not required to take risks, did not look at mtl, but we can expects MC to be forced to act
Well I am the author, so I will obviously be praising my own novel.
Anyway, before you read my novel, I would like to explain some of the characters and background of the novel.
The main character is Tang Yin. I prefer evil/villian main characters. Therefore, Tang Yin had been portrayed as a devil who only cares about himself and Xiao Fei. (If you decide to read the novel, you will find out who she is.) He will do anything that suits him, including killing innocent people for his own gain. He is similar to Fang Yuan from Reverend Insanity.
The background is a traditional ancient Chinese setting, so basically a wuxia or xianxia cultivation novel. However, most mc in wuxia novels are righteous and have a harem. I don't want any of that, i want the main character to focus solely on himself and Xiao Fei.
In my opinion, the writing quality is very good. This is my first novel, so there may be a few minor grammar or spelling mistakes. Please forgive me on this aspect. The way I write has been shaped by the various novels I have read.
These novels are: Reverend Insanity, Monster Paradise, Let Me Game In Peace, Warlock Of The Magus World, Birth Of Demonic Sword, Pursuit Of The Truth, Renegade Immortal, A Record Of A Mortals Journey To Immortality, Martial Peak, Bloodline System. There are a few more, but i cant remember.
Also I will be releasing at least 2 chapters a day, sometimes a chapter or two extra if I have a lot of time and get immersed in writing.
The story development is alright in my opinion. There is only one plot with an occasional plot twist here and there. There are no 2 plots mixed in together as I thought it might get confusing. If there is any type of plot you would like me direct some of my novel to, please let me know and if i find it feasible, ill implement it in the novel.
If there are any mistakes or suggestions you would like to notify me off, I will be all ears.
Thanks for reading this comment.
Same thing is interesting going on here.