Passive writing style same for the character. Story development is okay?
The concept of the character and the world is pretty interesting and all, but there are lots of holes when in comes to some details that aren't told at all that makes it passive. I felt like I needed to make my own details in my head. so yeah that's pretty much it...
Concept of being a vlogger and getting stronger is nice but the system is like how do we say this... It feels like it's new born it's missing lots of things. The power level of characters feel so different when I try to compare them with the side characters. Ranking of power is pretty badly made ig, Mc also doesn't keep his surrounding in check which kind of annoys me, for my personal opinion that is.
OMG!! What a suspenseful opening I love it!!!!! The characters are all so convincing as well I don't know who I like best :) Please send more; I'm intrigued
Have been anticipating the update for this novel....
As almost all the books under this shared universe definitely have mentioning of Chef Qin's famous pastries ?....
Looking forward to this story of Chef Qin and GXY
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I love the storyline of this novel and how you to describe the world is quite good for me, but you must improve your writing technique and grammar overall, i like it!
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I want to be very clear I really enjoy reading the story I just think it could be better I'm not a writer so I don't know how it could be better or any suggestions on what you could do but keep up the great work.
five stars. this novel basically does everything right and the writing and grammar are also really goodi just hope it won't be like other novels where they take a break and never returnall in all i would recommend this novel, just read the first few chaps and you'll be hooked trust me
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A total waste of time. This kind of concept could have been so much more but meh.
to fill the 140 characters screw it screw it screw it screw it screw it .
It's all fun and games, if you read novel where Mc bickering with a system first time. Awhile after though, it's just annoying. So, if you're already tired from stories where system is a greedy useless ****, don't begin.
Ok m done with this... The mc literally does nothing.... All the matters are taken care of by little loli... Mc has no presence.... Loli may as well be the mc... He can create a character and try to gain a legacy... No he does nothing.. He just leeches off of the loli.. This novel is a big disappointment... Its like so on so does this does that... And mc just watching doin nothing... Any problem? Loli wil take care if it.. Loli literally says mc is useless.. Still he does nothing abt it... If u want q novel where mc has 0 presence and where mc does nothing and just watches other ppl doing ****... Then this is the novel for u.. Or dont waste ur time on this
come on this is a good book, for me it's way better than "Pocket Hunting Dimension", really wish this will be released so we can vote for it