Ahora bien, esto no es un problema, sino más bien una preferencia personal y eso solo tiene que ver con que no me gusta la mentalidad infantil del personaje principal. Nunca he sido fan de que se use como un tipo de personalidad utilizado para personajes principales adultos, pero es lo que es lo que son los personajes es la elección de los autor
Just found this and looking forward to reading, nice to see more undertale fanfics hopefully I can find some warframe and borderlands ones that aren't dropped after read this.
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It is a unique idea to start of with and the plot is really interesting.Quick to read and the language is quite good.Great Job! Maybe longer chapters?
This is such a great novel. If you like pure evil MCs, this is a great read. The MC is cold, callous, manipulative, and truly knows himself and is true to his desires. The plot is great if you love a bit of gore, killer stuff, and the talk about how fragile people truly are. The plot also has a nice pace, not too fast or slow in my opinion. The world is getting built slowly but it’s going great so far for only 50 chapters. And I can’t say much about the update stability as well but I hope it updates soon with a notice or something soon because this is great.
I hope you’re healthy and safe, author!
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Sounds interesting
Anybody knows the raw?
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Author keeps typing he or she makes it very annoying and hard to read
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Hmmm, well written the synopsis and the world background but I don't know what is the point of the main character. I think we will know it for the upcoming chapters. No problem with the grammar.