Hem Hem. I'll say this simply, I'll say it once. So people in Qidian listen up.
The novel is great, otherwise "novelupdates" reviews would not have such high scores, if you're looking for a good translation then better pack your bags and move to another site.
Either translator or editor is retarded. Introduction page already has multiple grammatical errors, much more the actual translation of the novel. If translating is just a hobby or a source of fun for you then get out of here, this is not a playground.
Qidian International you already have a poor reputation, one of the reasons is shoddy translations. Please change the translator before it's too late.
This novel is more well known in the translated circles as Reverend Insanity, more information about it can be found in novel updates.
A kingdom-building novel that's good. This site is seriously lacking on pure kingdom-building novel I've been reading since the beginning of Webnovel and I've only discovered 3 pure kingdom-building novels.
1. The World Online
2. Release that Witch
3. Sword of Dawn
That's the only pure kingdom-building novel I've read in this site hope it will get chosen to make it 4
This one is Excellent, Great, Superb!!
The Story is slightly similar to gamers of underworld but the MC is the one who play the game and direct the playthrough through the story instead of picking player from earth to be a guinea pig. I dont want to spoil the fun so you better read it yourself all I could say is this one is guud!!
This is a really good book! You should continue to writing this in your free time. The MC only acts logically which greatly satisfies me. He may be quite emotionless when it comes to others but he still has a good side to those he treasures [Little One]
Interesting concept, but poorly executed. The entire novel itself isn't all that bad, it is just the grammar and spelling that gets me. Overlooking that, the novel isn't too bad at all.
I've been looking for a good Dungeon Lord themed novel on this site, something similar to 'My House of Horrors'. I finally found one! Thanks for your hard work, dear author!
I've never imagined the dungeon lord trope being crossed with the magic shop trope, so this is an incredibly awesome find for me. What's more is that the MC is not an asocial asshole, haha!
What makes this different from the average cultivator-system novel? Several things, I imagine. To me, one of its outstanding features is the adoption of mini-arcs for the minor characters. As far as I know, minor character arcs are nearly exclusive to Japanese light novels. Western novels use the technique too but they don't give the same treatment.
So, the character development of minor characters in this story is excellent! Even the dungeon monsters have backstories.
The dear author may be an otaku, haha! There are a number of references to Japanese fandoms and comparatively fewer to the Chinese side of things. Dear author, Ranma may be the Best but even he will acknowledge the sheer Awesomeness that is Ip Man!
Another cool thing: cultivators in NODS are not immortal gods. there are in fact legal and traditional precedents that allow cultivators and non-cultivators to live in open harmony, which includes the fact that everyone in the world is capable of cultivating. Some people just choose not too. I'd almost say this was a way to nerf the traditional cultivator model if the resurrection system had not been included.
Yet another cool thing: the NODS shop uses the latest trends in communications like QR codes and NFC protocols. There are a lot of stories that talk about 'latest technology' and yet the most advanced tech they show is WiFi and phone apps. What the hell, right?
The NODS shop also talks about store credits, in-store apps, personalized shop rewards and promos, streaming and pay-per-view services...insidious things. No one does consumerism like America! There were even a couple of chapters when the in-store rewards and promos discussion took over the story from the dungeons. Seriously. Maybe not so much description about the shop mechanics and more about the people.
Despite shop-filler chapters, the story manages to a modicum of momentum past a hundred chapters, where it again picks up.
Ahh, why is the level of tech in this shop not standard worldwide? If this level of functionality can be done with my phone, I will happily never leave my bed again.
The initial premise of the story means there's something for every one: monster capturing, system leveling, some food critiquing, some romance, party and raid battling, cultivation, business management, dungeon creation, infinite world theory, etc. The shop logistics is influenced by other store- theme novels here but it manages to exude its own charm. The use of pocket dimensions to expand and include shop services is great!
You know, this is the first MC I've read to be smacked down verbally for blindly following missions instead of actively participating in his own life by the shard of his mother's soul animated by the System into being an interface navigation assistant.
A hundred and thirty chapters in and no revenge schemes and blood feuds (yet, anyway), which is kind of refreshing. The customers and the dungeon monsters are starting to shine even more. I think some minor characters have more fans than the MC at this point.
Definitely a recommended read.
love your story I will give it a 10/10 wasn't expecting this but it really is one of the best stories I have ever read.Thank you very much ❤?
Interesting. It's good to read when there is nothing else to~~~ Thanks for the translators for their hard work. Excuse my very bad English (-_-;)・・・
Sucker for these stories! It was quite a nice and enjoyable read. Hmm. How can I help? I humbly suggest that the author use Grammarly app to further improve tiny grammar and capitalization missed. Please keep it up May the author write more, edit more, enjoy more, learn more, and maybe earn more soon!
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Doesn’t seem like the rest of the bad video game transmigration novel. Instead it kind of feels like The Legendary Mechanic but with a smaller ceiling.