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As is the story isn't bad enough, the author decided to add HAREM AND ROMANCE into the mix..............
I personally hate romance and harem so I can't be too cruel with the review.
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Its a good written book with awesome storyline, it has heart, and brilliance in it, all that you want from a story is in here, nice third person view
Hi, this is the translator, Charlie. This is a translation of a Korean novel on Munpia about a man who uses hard work to become a millionaire! I hope you guys enjoy this novel!
How you explain everything in details is really helpful and I love it, its very understandable
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The main character gets seven wishes in chapter 1 and there are grammar mistakes all over the place and in some parts of the story the grammar is so bad it's unreadable. I also didn't make it past chapter 1. I also find it weird that there are no other reviews mentioning this. so in my opinion it's probably the other reviews are either fake or the people who wrote them are so in love with the idea of this story they can't see how badly it's written and then there's the possibility they're just trying to be nice.
When I'm reading other novels, I look at the number of pages (on my cellphone) and think "damn, there are still 20 pages".. then I read this novel. I can read 50 pages, but I won't feel exhausted reading it. It's just too damn good.
heyo crazy cronie here,
review on 31/03/2021 @chap27 (released chap till date: 37)
review divided in:
Short review
Long review
IMO
Ratings
Conclusion
Warning (includes spoilers)
short review:
A dark novel with a ruthless mc who loves to tortures only those who are criminals.
long review:
pros:
1) A completely original story. By original i meant the concept is original. And even if there are something similar to this, to me this is the first time I read something like this.
2) This is a dark novel. Brutal and cruel. Mc ruthlessly tortures people and author describes it. (This can both be a pro or a con depending on readers. To me a pro, coz i was bored of fluffy novels)
3) The only thing mentioned in this novel till now is how mc enjoys Ruthlessly torturing & killing criminals. Yeah no romance, no fantasy... Wait this might be a fantasy given system and all but yeah thats pretty much it... But then again this is interesting.
4) I love the pacing of this novel. Literally the events are not postponed forever and takes place when you need them. When break is needed from all those tortures you get a break, when you need to see the tortured ones, they are tortured.
5) I love how the author mentions the user comments. That's a plus from me. Except for mc everyone has conversations.
cons:
1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] As mentioned above this is a dark novel. For people who love light hearted novel... Yeah don't even dare to read this one lol (This depends person to person, for me a pro)
2) Zero character depth. The mc is not explained. Mc shows no emotions rather just a cold expression. Heck how the mc looks we don't even know. Same with other characters, they are introduced only for filling spots.
3) updates, this novel is inconsistent in updates at least till now it is. Only 24 chapters has been released till now but i guess ch/day may remain inconsistent even in the future coz one day its 5chaps while there is only 2 next day and then next day there is none.
4) world building sucks. Nothing is explained. How the mc arrived in this world. Scratch that, we don't even know if this is original earth or a parallel one. I mean what we know is only from synopsis. Where he got system from, what is system, and everything else nothing about the world is mentioned.
5)Little to no character interaction. Almost no conversations. Literally MC has almost no conversations. Even for a loner mc this is a bit too much.
6) Idk if it's the author or TL but there are few mistakes... These mistakes can't be overlooked, for ex *SPOILER*
A victim's tongue was cut by MC's methods, but he was still speaking (literally said roaring) with mc...
IMO:
- More conversations with MC &
- a little bit of MC's background reveal will be appreciated.... But then again only 30+ chaps are revealed.
RATINGS:
writing: 8/10 (con-6)
update: 78/10 (con-3)
plot: 7.5/10 (pro-1,2&3, con-1&4)
characters: 7.5/10 (con-2)
pacing: 8/10 (pro-4)
dialogues: 8/10 (con-5)
entertainment: 10/10
OVERALL: 4/5
Conclusion:
This novel has excellent potential! A dark and brutal mc who enjoys torturing. I am seriously waiting for more updates:).
Next review after chap 100
WARNING:
*SPOILER (not exactly)*
- MC may seem evil, but he is an anti- hero, though me may act evil in the future...
- mc is very calculative. And he has never failed till date.
the translation quality is getting worse and worse I'm sure its just machine translation now simple mistakes like he and she are wrong and the protagonist name is wrong a few times so what about the side characters we rarely see the only thing good right now is update stability
