The way this story is developing is really good and I like how the MC evolves. I also like the way you wrote the book. This is a good read, keep up the good work.?
The concept of the story is super generic but the writing is good enough that I don't care. I like how the MC just drunkenly fall into his fantasy world. I will definitely be back to read more later.
I am sorry if I skimmed over the first chapter, but I found it really mysterious even at the beginning. And I love a mystery in the story. -The writing quality is readable and understandable. For someone who is dumb like me in processing words, I can read it. -The stability of updates... As an author who fails, I don't really mind the stability as long as you update and upload a chapter.-The story development, I will still have to read more, but I don't have time for that as an author trying to achieve something. However, looking at the number of chapters, there is a story. And that's what matters.-Character design and world background could be labeled as one, but my thoughts on it depends on the writing quality. So its as good as five stars. Good luck and God bless.
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It has an engaging story. Don't let the reviews talking about writing quality discourage you to read this or you will miss out on a good novel. Yeah, it's not the best in terms of grammar but compared to average novel on wn? It's like Shakespeare.
Hey Author! The story was excellent, a MC who was tired of life getting a hope to survive in the cruel world! The grammar was good too, there isn't anything much except that I personally felt the World background explanation was a bit lacking. Well I don't know for sure since you may have plan to explain it in future chapters. anyway It was a good read, I will come back when the novel would have more chapters.
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Website : qidian chinaViews : 6.11millionRating : 8.0(968)Chapters : 1620Status : completedWord count : 4.94millionauthor level : lv3No of works : 5If you are interested, my reviews are in almost every novel with atleast 3 likes.
In terms of grammer and plot as of chapter 25 there is not much better on the entire site. I can’t judge writing stability as this is the first day but as long as we get 1-3 chapters a day this series will definitely be in the top. Cant judge world building either as we are only at the start but I have high hopes.
Story had a lot of promise and i enjoyed reading it. Unfortunately it looks like the author has dropped it. There have been no updates here or on his patreon for a while now.
Hi and good evening or afternoon/morningI have finally finished editing the first chapter of this book and let me just say it wasn't as easy as I thought it would beWhoever thinks editing a book is easier that writing one doesn't know what he/she is talking aboutAnyways, I'll really appreciate if you guys can just look through the new first chapter and tell me if it's better that beforeAt least I'll know I'm actually achieving somethingThank in advance, Your Writer
First, I was skeptical because of some other reviews. But after I started reading I became hooked. I think story is good. The main thing I love is the MC's power.