Well the story was going great for a time: the world building well done and well thought out, the characters felt full and lifelike, the storyline was also progressing smoothly until.... around 75 chapters in, all the H chapters started being omitted from the story and only posted on PA@@EON There you have to pay $5 a month to read them and normally I wouldn’t complain about this but when the chapters are sometimes unreadable due to grammatical errors and translation quality I just don’t think it justifies paying money for a half baked product. Did you think everyone was here for the cooking dear Author? We wanted our sexy times with our lovely maids!!!
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a very nice book. Good Pacing, Nice World Building, Writing Quality is good, Story Development is smooth. No unbearable info dumps. Reasonable Plot.
Sounds like a good read compared to the other plain garbage that webnovel usually chooses of repeat system troupes. Im biased cuz im a rebirth fan though
A good read and interesting story. Realllllly like it though. Took 5 hours to finish from chapter 1 until 56 and still wating for update????. Keep the spirit ???
Great story development.... Love the charactersThe only problem about this novel would be the late update period.....and I feel the story could be more realistic and mature rather than the normal cliche scene
WTF author? I removed this from my library years ago hoping to come back and read it after it had more chapters, tf is this? are you a snail? do you have less time than time has time? What's with you? are you having problems at home? do you require assistance? can I interest you in my windowless room with a computer for you to slave away and finish this book? I promise to feed you three meals a day.
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I think I've read a lot of books in this platform, but I believe this os one of the best I've read so far. Although the idea of a Demon Lord reincarnating in modern times might not be new, I can assure you that this is beautifully done. The characters have carisma and the comedy is awesome. If you decide to read It, you'll have a great time.
This seems like it will be interesting. Defnitely needs a quality checker for each chapter. I think a kid wrote it and posted it. Story wise id give it a whole hearted read.
I know it’s a bit early on to give a review so I’m giving it a medium review which I hope is ok don’t want to be harsh love seeing fellow new writers but I see myself so much of myself in your writing style and personal wanted to give you something to be able to reflect on and some motivation to write I will read your story and I will be waiting to see if you to continue I have also commented on your chapters as well saying similar things but i wish to repeat in more detail.Good things1.You have the idea always important 2.you have ok grammar could use a little improvement but that’s fine we’re not professional writersThings you could improve1.Context matters build up a description of your character, new family, new world, compare2.cultivation isn’t everything as I feel a problem all novels especially young one who set themselves these massive cultivation realms with fancy words is they often have no meaning to a reader there just word so try and help the audience gain insight on what they mean and how strong each realm is don’t go into to much detail3.personally don’t like first person too much and I think you would find it easier to write in the 3rd (my opinion lol)Please continue to write I will read!!!Shameless promotion time Checkout blind saint as I’m currently writing it it’s not great but I think you might be good for you to read a style of writing that’s the opposite of your own
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