Loving the story, keep it up. can't wait to read more as it continues. Even though you do take sometime to update chapters but your writing is impressive
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After struggling, dropping the novel and then picking it up again, I’m finally quitting at 1354. I seriously have a ton of complaints but I’ll just put the main one here.The author made it too obvious that he’s just trying to drag this novel as long as possible. We all know the mc can pickup attributes, and when he picks up attributes from people stronger than him it works even better since he grows much faster, even making him jump levels earlier in the novel. However, The author basically nerfed the mc as soon as he left earth so that he could drag the story.That’s not even the main reason why I’m dropping it. The tipping point for me was during the war on the 29th defense planet. Three eternal ranked were involved in that war. The human eternal wounded one of the devils and then another showed up ready to clash. But guess what? NO ATTRIBUTE BUBBLES FROM THEM, the author didn’t even mention them dropping attribute bubbles, the story just continued like normal with the mc picking up attribute bubbles from everyone else on the battlefield. Of course, why would the author let him pickup attribute bubbles from them? This would make him get stronger too quickly, and since he just wants to milk this story as much as possible, he just didn’t want it to happen, so he just didn’t let it happen. In the earlier part of the novel the mc grew so quickly but ever since he left earth he grew SUPER Slowly, even while coming in contact with people much much stronger than him. It slowly became a novel where it’s just face slapping. Someone Looks down on mc because his level is weak, but of course, he has so many things that can make him fight across realms. Boom, their face gets slapped. I also have to mention how terrible the story became later on. The author started dragging fights that could be done in a single chapter, making them take 5-6 chapters or sometimes even more! I also can’t forget to add that the author started writing entire chapters describing information about attribute bubbles. It wouldn’t be bad if he did it like a litrpg or something but nah, it’s just a filler chapter that’s there to make up numbers.I’ve never been so angry about a novel in my life. It had so much potential at the start.I
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Ive also writen a fanfic about itachi in dc world , it is called “Itachi Uchiha in Arrowverse”. It might not be good but if you want to read about it then please do so. #PLUG
If you guys have any complaints dont be scared to tell me, i could really use those. I want to improve my writing so i could give you guys the best stories. I have many stories i have in my head but it is very dificult writing about it.
He’s too much of an asshole and immature compared to other martial arts mc’s. Martial arts is supposed to be about training your mind too but his character is no better than a cocky bully, besides he’s cheating on his wife and the content is all too repetitive. He either meets someone that isn’t his friend and kills him or he’s insulted by a stranger and kills him. Nothing civilized to read here.
So, he went to heaven! Now, is this where this will start or will this be ending?.
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pick this one Im tired trying to read cultivation novels I like this new one. really
This is crazy good for an Original Work!!! I have only read a few chapters so far. Normally I would never leave a review after just a few chapters unless the author was really bad. But this one is so GREAT at writing and the logic behind his world and world building is fantastic! This LN actually has the "heavens" of the cultivation universe/world show an intelligence or capacity to think and that it is actively continuously working against cultivators growing stronger (or also called going against the heavens). Very great start to this LN and I really can't wait to read more and get an in-depth immersion into this LN's world :-)
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Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this.
Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word.
It's collection.
What's collection? Obviously, it's adding this novel to your library fool.
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact
[email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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