im probably just going to drop this novel the dam terms are too confusing instead of sayign the cultivation realm they are in the keep saying demon-killing battle kigs/gods like what the hell realm is that supposed to be?
Read until chap 310, already a good ending. Quality is dropping so imma stop at good point.
For me this story is a good one but for those who hate harems and to much sex this isn't for you guys, anyways there are alot of things a that are forced and a lot of unanswered questions till the end that was only explained as "I don't care" by the MC such as The one who hid Earth and what is its history, the ending was too rushed and his conquest was so rushed that it almost all of it is full of sex and the bonding with his parents and friends chapters could be counted with all of my fingers. For me it was good but not too good, just enjoyed it to waste some time.Anyways if you are looking for a harem and a good ending but rushed novel, read this, spoiler! Yan Yuri and the MC never even got together, she just got mentioned 3 times in the whole story and was left out there with the rest of abandoned humanity.Oh and Sex Goddess was mentioned in the story far less than what you would think and expect her in the later parts.Oh and also he fucked the world itself hahahhhaahaah.
It took longer then I should have to get to the main smuff and tuff but everything else made up for it SO well
That's a really great story, I'm reading it daily since a bit more than a year I think. In my opinion the story can be divided in several arc; some of them containing smaller, mini-arc; I don't recall any bad arc, all of them were pretty good with some of them really awesome. It also gave me the impression that the quality of both the writing of the story and the translation got better and better even though it was already good at the beginning. So I really recommend you this story if you are searching for a good action story with a smart MC, no harem (until now at least, don't how it will be in the future be it doesn't fit with the MC personality) and a nice op eye ^^
Finished reading the whole book. Will post points on each of the 5 Judging points.
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Writing Quality: Overall generally good. slight grammatical mistakes that are easily over looked. They are consistent errors so once you're able to know what word to substitute for the written one you're good. There are times when names are mixed up, but again, easy to figure out who is being talked about.
Stability of Updates: Book is finished. Nuff said.
Story Development: This one gets the lowest rating from me. The pacing is all opver the place, and some time skips are sudden and random with no warning given. Also, around chapter 170/207 the pacing takes such a HUGE leap. we go from this guys day to day, to suddenly we're rushing the ending, introducing new kingdoms and entire story lines, with only 30 chapters or less left. The first 100ish chapters had great pacing, and while there were issues with him doing things it's clearly stating he can't, it's good. But then he's suddenly one of the most powerful in the entire dimension? (trying to avoid giving direct spoilers) It feels like Author just got tired of his story and threw in the kitchen sink and everything else, wrapped it up with some random time travel and said good enough.
Character Design: Zayne is very well designed. He's well fleshed out and easy to comprehend. The other characters Author takes the time to have him really interact with are also well designed.
World Background: MC clearly has memory loss, and in the first half of the novel, Author really draws you in. He makes you want to learn more about this massive realm with the MC. And then he tosses it all down the drain at the end.
OVERALL: Decent read. Not Authors best work. Possibly his worst. Rushed ending killed any excitement I had for the novel. Would recommend? No. Would recommend the Author for having a decent writing style? absolutely.
I feel like this is the only novel that started in recent times that has come this far. It has consistent updates and the quality hasn't dropped significantly even nearing 600 chapters. I wouldn't call this a great novel by any means, but it's a great to pass time with. More importantly it manages to expertly evade all the pitfalls/turn-offs that new novels all seem to have. Yep, there maybe nothing great about it, but there is absolutely nothing bad about it. And this is something I cannot tell about any of the recent novels. The only warning signals going on in my head is about the whole "human race" thing. With increasing diplomatic channels and the new event, I hope they don't harp on about it. More importantly for someone intending to be Lord of All Races, I would find it a bit uncomfortable, to put any race above the other.
Plz pick up this novel and do any body have raw. .....
Translation quality: terrible. The translation quality up to chapter 40 is good, but after that it’s like a switch was flipped and now it’s closer to poorly edited MTL. At this point, the translation is so literal that it’s difficult to follow. 2/5
Updating stability: solid. Even though the updates are bad, at least they’re regular. That said, they immediately released 25 chapters into their privilege tier so it could obviously be better. 4/5
Story development: mixed. The cases are interesting, but outside of them the story is too bland. Everything goes right for the MC and he’s never challenged or in conflict with anything else. And while it doesn’t particularly bother me, the “China STRONK” nationalism is particularly fierce in this one. 3/5
Character design: lackluster. While the criminals are interesting and there’s some gray to the morality, the characters we spend the most time with are bland and uninteresting. The romance is the same: bland. It’s also rushed and the characters involved are too perfect. 2/5
World background: uninspired. Normally, I find the nationalism inherent in Chinese novels intriguing, because their take on foreign countries as filtered through the state media and Great Firewall gives a unique perspective on the author’s culture, but here it actually hurts them. The MC transmigrated to a world where nothing is different, except that China is as powerful there as the US is in reality. Other than that, there is no difference from the day-to-day that we already live with so the worldbuilding is something the author just skipped. 2/5
Overall: I’m dropping this at chapter 90-something because of the tl quality more than anything else. While the cases are indeed interesting, there’s just not enough there to justify straining to read the terrible translation.
WHAT A BLAST!! amazing story line although the author really loves the Hun Clan( plot armor too strong). Really loved the romance, but i think that the harem can still be improved. The translations can be sometimes confusing but people can still understand it so its okay. GREAT NOVEL AND I REALLY RECOMMEND TO EVERYONE
it' a great novel, but author can you tell me, why have you it stopped updating
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