i like the story however i think the mc could be better written he has some good moments however he is usually just as bad and treats even people who are nice to him badly. then about the pricing later on is between 15 - 20 coins i think it's pretty pricey considering most stories have 10 - 12 coins per chapter. despite everything i just said i still recommend the story it has its good moments i love world the story takes place in and think everyone should try reading it regardless of what i said
oh man. .. .its quite good. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. ... it has potential to develop even further. ... day updates might ruin it though. .. .
In this novel, there's a lot I like and a lot I don't.
I like the Mech design and the MC's progress in it. I feel like there's a lot of potential in that area that's been wasted for the sake of stuffing gods and cultivation aspects down our throats.
The MC is somewhat on the darker side. While intriguing at first, it's gotten sickening after a couple thousand chapters. Still within tolerance, but at the point I'm at, already unlikeable. Many times I get worried about the manic obsessiveness and short-sighted greed of the MC. His great vision and direction all seems unnecessarily forced, overly selfish, and mainly an excuse for the author to force plots. The way he treats people and close ones is also disturbing to say the least. I'm hoping we'll see some redemption phase or somehow see things get better, but so far, it's a downward spiral that's lasting hundreds of chapters.
That brings me to what I dislike the most about this novel; it's slow. The updates are good and regular, but the story itself plods along like a tortoise. Just recently, the MC and company took no less than Six Chapters Just To Launch Their Ships and start their next journey. Twenty chapter battles, chapters that mainly consist of MC's speculation... the writing is very long-winded, and the chapters are short, to boot. There are things we've been waiting for that's still 'coming' since well over a thousand chapters ago. Writing quality is as good as it gets on webnovel, and the updates are thick and fast, so both get 5. Story development would be higher, but due to the slow pacing, only gets a 3.
Also, the author seems to like forcing the MC into trouble-farms on purpose. His aims, his needs, his people... so many of his close ones turn out to be endless sources of trouble. Maybe this is supposed to excuse his twisted personality? Just courting his main LI alone is enough to pitch him into the wrong side of an interstellar war. Plus, I really dislike that girl and all her people. It's a rare situation when I find myself hoping that the side the MC is on would lose the war, if not completely, then at least enough to learn some humility and respect for others.
While there's some effort on the author's part to give some depth and personality to the characters, generally speaking, I don't like them. There were a few I could have liked early on, but at this point, there's almost no character in the story I like any more. I'd give Character Design 2 stars, but that's it.
As for the World Background... I gotta say, I like it. Not entirely, because just having three classes of ranking feels too simplistic, but the spread of humanity across the galaxy and there being many nations and cultures across the void... it has vast potential, though the author seems to be trying to rush past most of it and focus only on the brave lots making an expedition into a new frontier just like the MC. I wavered a bit between giving this four or five stars before settling on 4 because while we know the vast world is out there, a fat lot of it mean very little except for the current places the MC is involved in.
I'm still reading it due to my interest in Mechs, and though there's a lot in it that I dislike, there's enough going for it that I'm still reading. I mean, I've gotten this far with it already, I may as keep going and see how it goes. Overall score: 3.8
First of all, props to the translators for working through the medical terms and all that. It must definitely not be easy.
As for the novel, 'meh' is really all I can say. The author gets a thumbs up for daring to create a medical novel, that's brave and must have done some extensive research, but the execution of characters and story development leaves much to be desired. The MC is rather uninteresting and the "harem" feels like plot fillers (aka unnecessary and dull).
If you read this story just for fun, then go ahead. there's no use for logic here.
The plot contains most cliche in Chinese web novel. a man die, got reincaranted or transmigrated to other bodies, get a system who knows where it comes from, stacked with too many coincidences lucky event.
he want a lackey, he got a talented people from mobs he casually grabs. he buy an estate on a whim, his parent think that estate had potential do develop. he get headache because massive information enter his brains, still he doesn't know how to greet his parent, or even his school and class. that's too hillarious, silly, and contradicting!
Why do you vote for these trash novels? This is a (bad) novel site, not a fan-fic filled forum/chan. If I wanted to see fan-fic I would go to anywhere else where those are free and a plenty.
Excellent grammar, interesting story with a lot of potential. Would be interested in the romance part, but I have no complaints so far................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
As an author myself, good job to you, I say. Not a big fan of gamelit/litrpg, but this work is of good quality. The writing quality is excellent, the characters are good, storyline is progressing very well and worldbuilding is on good ground. Keep it up, fellow author.
Recommended. Try reading a few chapters and you will get stuck at this one. Perfectly written until now and have great expectations. I hope the Author keeps writing.
I never stopped reading from start to finish! Chapter 1-60, I enjoyed every single one! I hope that this novel is picked and continued instead of the other copy and paste novels that fill this site!
Not many sport story can hook me. So congrats. Not only that, i never saw a basketball story so it is a plus. However, the writing quality suck, but its ok since it is yours first time so i cant go hard on you. story development is ok but still can be improve and i cant say anything about world background since u use real earth as the background. All in all, for a first story by new writer, u have good idea for the story and this make up with ur poor writing. i wish you luck.
I'm so happy someone picked up this novel I'm even more happy I found it ?I'd recommend reading both the original and this.It's essentially gourmet of another world but for wine.