Writing quality: There are very few minor mistakes, the grammar is really good and you cannot really complain about itCharacter design: He is a kind soul, which a lovely mother, his childhoos is sweet and hard at the same time, but as the story you will see him grow up, and it makes even sense! No stupid character, no unnessesary face slapping, I like how he grows, how he behaves, and cant wait too see moreStoey development: Given a second chance in a new world, he has to grow up from an innocent child to a strong cultivator, the beginning is a bit harder to read but get over it! At some point you can clearly see the flow of the story of this masterpieceUpdate stability: 3 chapters a week are good but I truly wish for moreWorld background: nothing known of as for now, only some basics
I see there this is going, a D&D fantasy world where everyone calls the protagonist by his Chinese name, a dumb system awakening and mc who gets laid in the first chapter on a woman we barely know anything about. Great character design and plot development, I am focking dropping this. Also thank you very much WebNovel for dropping Warlock Apprentice this week and picking up this peace of idiotic wishfulfilment crap.
Worthless translator, audacity to call his readers ungrateful brats but actually expect us to pay soul stones for chapters? What happens when us ungrateful brats leave his ass for the dogs? Pitiful, no maturity, actually makes a livelihood off us readers and our donations but can call us brats. Anyways enough of this rant and forget this trash attitude translator.
A interesting story with a compelling world that unfortunately suffers from some severe pacing issues, with entire chapters dedicated to explain simple ideas, making the result feel like filler. I believe that if the author can work out this problem he is bound to be successful, since clearly he has talent.
If you like reading copypasta filler then you'll like this novel!!! This whole novel is big stinking pile of garbage. It's not even original garbage. Blah blah 2 sentences about alchemy blah blah 2 sentences of outrageous behavior blah blah insert 1.5 million chapters of cliche over used crowd reactions blah blah 75,000 of the same chapters about what he used to be every other sentence blah blah more crowd reactions then 2 million or so chapters later something completely cliche happens and the 'plot' moves forward an inch to repeat this mind numbingly horrific cycle. Don't read this novel. It is time you will never get back. Your children will hate you and your parents will abandon you from the miasma of suck this novel will surround you with. You'll have more fun peeling your fingernails off with razor blades then dipping your hand in lemon juice.
A very good novel, I've been trying to get people to warm up to the dream world through a short chapter but sinxe i suck at writing for others i couldn't get this theme more popular, so i wrote on tge forum my hope to see a novel which connect people using dreams. Some new novels took a bit of it and i was happy about it but this is tge first novel that is so close to what I had in mind especially those last few chapters 47 and more. I mean a massive interdimentional dream world, without history mix in. Fresh pure start, and countless cultures. No killing but amazing encounter between worlds and cultures, sharing of technology and magic, basically a Focus of humanity best and worst (lest we are idilic).
Comedy gold! I've read till the latest chapter and I want more! I don't know what else to say other than saying this novel is just perfect. The comedy-action and the characters are so on point. The romance part makes me kinda jealous, to be honest. 5/5 no doubt! I will wait for the next update!
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I enjoyed the novel, but the harem started getting out of hand. When it gets to the point where I can't remember who each of the girls is anymore, that's where I draw the line lol. And one of the girls I really didn't like. She just blatantly seduced mc to use him even though her backstory was she was a supposedly pure girl. Other than that, mc was super op and his power was interesting and used well. I enjoyed his fast increases in power and he did a good job of effectively using it. Only thing I would complain about is some of the gear stats at the start seemed a bit imbalanced compared to how they actually were used. Dropped on ch276 because of harem getting out of hand.
Please please please , atleast read till chapter 25 , pleeeeaaassseeeCultivation system has been born anew in this story , it makes more sense and it's congruent to plots. Most well thought cultivation system in an original story, till date.You know how people say , "this story took me for a ride" , yeah paste that feeling hereThe tone of the story isn't conservative in the se₹ual sense , but the stakes are egalitarian between men and women Story makes sense, AUTHOR DOESN'T WASTE A SINGLE WORD, everything is there for a reason
how often does this story being updated?