The story is great! But the updation is not consistent. it would be great if the story is updated Daily consistently. Also, a very short chapters.
I couldnt continue reading, it was awful. I stopped at chapter 4, maybe it improves later? So far with what I've read, it was all about describing luxury items and money. It felt shallow and vain, there wasn't a lot of thought, emotion or drive in the character. He was simply buying things and describing his purchases. Supporting characters had even less personality, women were only ever beautiful and not much else, other guys were just obstacles to gain more skills from. Did he even have friends? I think its enjoyable if you like to live thru the character for that kind of life Im guessing. As for me, it was just too shallow but it wasnt badly written. I did enjoy the writing style but Im definitely not reading more of this.
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