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I truly like this novel. I'm enjoying it. I hope the author doesn't drop this.
The spelling made it hard to read. I couldn’t continue on. You misspelled words like “Athlete” and “nurse”. I know some people have trouble spelling, but you might benefit from an editor.
A great football lightnovel, i hope you keep on updating and I appreciate how quick the updates are man.
An incredibly well written novel/book, I really enjoyed the character design as it was very creative and unlike any other character or oc I've ever seen or heard of. Very entertaining! And honestly would recommend.
Oops, almost forgot the tradition of Webnovel, my bad. Here's what I have been planning when I began writing this book.Writing style: Well, I am trying my best to present the story in simple English while also providing decent immersion.Characters: This is one part of the story I can say with my chest puffed up, they are realistic. Most of my efforts went into designing characters that are life-like.World Background: This is set on Earth involving its numerous complexities. I assure you that any magical phenomenon set in the story will have a solid logic. Grammar: Well, my language is almost perfect. Though it may not be on the level of standard publications since I barely spend about an hour of editing per chapter.Updates: Well, this is something for the future. I am currently uploading 3 chapters per day, but don't know how long I could keep this up. Maybe if I go full-time writing, this would be easy. Let's leave it for the future.Conclusion: Have a read and see for yourself. I haven't used any cliche till now, so hehe. Expect a good reading time
A wonderful action-packed story with a unique point of view. The writer is very talented with a wide imagination. Well-written novel. Keep writing!
This Novel had so much potential but was ruined by every character that isn’t an ally of the MC. Nobody uses their brain unless they’re on the MC’s side.Every character is his enemy as well, haven’t seen a single neutral character yet except a clan leader but that’s the minimum he’s 400 years old. Everyone else just slanders the MC and basically 20% of the dialogue of this novel (free chapters) is just random characters insulting the MC for no apparent reason at all, (6 Year old MC btw) (he’s not even 6 yet but that just makes it worse) Anyways, unless someone tells me this nonsense stops I can’t bring myself to pay just to read something that is clearly triggering me….
I have only read starting 30-40 chapters but I love it. i just want to confirm if author has permanently dropped it or will it be resumed some day...
mc has social anxiety and stutters everytime he talks out loud despite being with a different woman every night in his previous life, everybody ever in the chapters I've read thinks everything weird about him is from his childhood parental abuse, like their thoughts are so unbelievable that it is harder to read than the stutters, the structure of a lot of sentences are not done properly
i don't quite understand how modern weapons which pack a punch more than swords cannot kill your average bandit (he was shot in the eye mind you) while a dull cheap sword can do so and i'd have liked to see MC growing personality wise and his system is more like a merchant business rather than a system which will allow the Host to grow stronger and face challenges its not rewarding
I can't read it , it is so bad. You worship the MC of the original story too much , so your OC/SI is pretty much a wimp. You just keep praising Fang Yuan like you want to marry him or something . I get it that you like that character but what's the use of writing an SI/OC character if you are just planning on making him a wimp to worship your favourite character. Fang Yuan was a reincarnated 500 year old person but he was still in school and weak at the start , while your SI/OC has complete future knowledge and is the grandson of a Rank 3 master , yet your SI/OC fears him like he is some God . "Looked at him at the awakening ceremony and got Scared" such a wimp SI/OC.