Ngl, I don't read cultivation stuff much so don't expect an expert review.
Also, this is a review after reading 5 chaps so I can't rate World background as the world is still being discovered.
What I do read are good stories (aside from my guilty pleasure ones hehe), and I can undoubtedly say this is one of those.
Tho I must say that explanations in between dialogues are a bit too long, it's worth reading nonetheless.
What I liked the most while reading was the story's character.
They didn't feel 1 dimensional and dialogues actually felt real and not just forced lines like in a play.
I liked the touch of comedy which I think will be there throughout the story and I also liked how the author knows how to develop the characters.
In just 4 chapters you will notice that the MC is growing as he navigates through life and business. And oh do I like the business touch lol!
Anyway, all in all, I think it'll be a great read so it's going in my library, and here's my 5-star review keke.
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Was pretty good until MC decided to join a guild :(. I was reading for the lone wolf playstyle so will probably drop this novel if nothing changes.
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Pretty good I think ! ! !
Pretty good I think ! ! !
Pretty good I think ! ! !
Hi, I'm the author of the adventurer system! Also, this is a shameless review.
first of all, I don't have much vocabulary so some words are repeated, but I guarantee you that I already made each arc of the story. I admitted that there are some grammatical issues, but don't blame me English is not my native language hahaha! I will try to fix it as soon as possible.
About Drake? All question has the answer, so stay tuned.
To the readers, read my work I hope you enjoy it, I'm really glad this is the reason why I keep writing, thank you!
i really like this novel or whatever it is, but i cannot give the full 5 stars without further chapters, which I believe will be interesting.
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A combination of a dumb mc who finally gets his power at chapter 6 or 7, barely uses his power, doesn’t research common knowledge, author who flip flops between a westernized name and chinese name, and chapters that are fillers since one scene needs like 10 chapters.
Waste of time, please don’t pick this
I really really like the story, its funny, and the maids are brilliant however the translation quality is rivaling the worst MTL Ive ever read. It frequently mixes up gender pronouns like shes into hes and sometimes will simply shorten sentences into something completely unintelligible. If anyone knows where I can find the raws to this theres a 9/10 chance itll be better translated because I really want to read this but the qualitys so poor.
The plot is quite unique. The description of the environment shows the research done by the writer. The character's emotions are also well written.Keep Going!!!
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you