I'm sorry but you are wayyyyy of your mark thereI can't say anything because it is still currently some 500-800 chapters away, but damn bro what you are writing about is just straight up wrong. But kudos tho for the writing itself. It's just the details doesn't match up with the original story that it becomes such a turn off
if u are picking old dropped stories at least pick good ones like plague docter,the world of dieties, holy roman empire and many more.Good stories with unique plots and world building are not getting picked and stories from same theme of rebirth with system, face slapping cultivation novels etc are picked with subpar ratings. pls see to this problem webnovel admins.
A narcissistic person like me would always try to find faults even in the best novel and grumble about insignificant things. However, this novel is really something, a real attention-seeker. This novel is one of the few ones which made me stay awake until 7 a.m. in the morning.Let me tell you! Going to sleep at 7 a.m. is not good!Webnovels usually lack the tension which classic novels have, despite the heavy bloodshed and horrifying monsters. But this novel fulfills that. Although we know that the Protagonist is obviously going to create his own village in the future, the Author doesn't simply let his creation grant that wish easily!The Protagonist is tested, again and again. The tension is high in the beginning, and you can't help but root for the Protagonist. The world around him is very ruthless, and antagonists are extremely scheming.A thing worth applauding is that although the tension in the plot is similar to classic novels, the flow of the story as well as wish-fulfillment factor does not deviate from the standard web novel pattern.Western web novels and their writers, for example, The Wandering Inn, does not provide this. Although the writing is good, it provides no wish-fulfillment.I hope this novel gets picked and we get to see what our Village Head does in the future!
Very great and interesting story.I really enjoyed the plot of the story.Im looking forward to seeing its completion.Excelllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeennnnnnnnttttttttttttttttttttttttt