So much plot armor everytime the Mc is about to die or does something reckless as he usually does something extraordinary saves him and he just forget about it and continues to do stupid stuff without thinking about the consequences ??????????
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THIS IS A MASTERPIECE . NO QUESTION NEEDED. JUST READ IT I can literally see that don has upped his game in this novel & it is getting better & better each chapter. the brutality & Cunningness of hunter is LOVEABLE . he's a genius. keep it up don. it's gonna be another superhit novel - . .all the best
The storytelling is very amateurish, there's some blatant fan service and casual sexism, but at least the MC is smart and the system mechanics are interesting.Reading up to chapter 36, I find the MC's rational decision making very refreshing. The game mechanic (where leveling up with soul energy sometimes rewards you with an item instead if there's excess) is creative in its own way.However the storytelling itself is amateurish. Small fights that we know the MC or another character will win are described instead of cut, allowing the plot to progress faster. There's also a lot of repetitive descriptions of characters that should also be cut.Tropes: Ice queen tsundere, a lot of hot blooded men, and OP dark lord MC himself. No arrogant young masters (yet).Also, Lilith could totally be cut out of the beginning. She's only there for comedic relief, fanservice, and to inform the MC of "things he would figure out eventually."Lastly, there is definitely some casual sexism, culture shocks, that people might not like.
hmmmm..... interested o.... loving this book o
is it about beast n warewolf n all that??? if its about it then I'm not continuing it. i dont like warewolf n beast type books.
This is a very good book. I would definitely recommend it. In addition, the author updates regularly.
the Book is interesting. can't wait to read the rest
5 stars bcus you wouldn’t see this review otherwise. Don’t start book, UNLESS completed. Even then, you’ll be wasting $$ since the story just goes in circles. It had a great start but at this point, wasn’t worth it. I stopped reading 7 weeks ago and came back to see if story progressed. And NOPE!
I'm in love
I'm still waiting for your next update
just see how yesterday scene was Superb, thanks to thea, I didn't regret opening this app yesterday, if only we can be focusing on thea and James fighting together for now..