ChanganChen
I like this story it has very charming characters and I personally like how it's paced also love how it is slowly becoming more supernatural but the mc OMG he's such a player
great story and translation hope it doesn't get dropped
I'm currently reading their other book (reincarnation of the strongest sword god) and I'm quite anticipation this...........................
It is really good and has a unique plot....Best of luck for WPC ......???. I Will gonna recommend it to others.
Plot is pretty good, I really like it. I hope that it can expand from the target being Olivia to other women. ALSO PLEASE UPDATE MORE REGULARLY DONT GIVE UP ON THIS BOOK
I love the story one of my favourites on this app but i am must say this first this story is not for everyone and the grammar is very bad at MTL level read if you enjoy and don't mind the grammar
Good good good, just please queue this up. It's a very good concept.
Hi!I am the author of this novel. Firstly, I really want to scream because I am so excited to finally released this novel! Yeay! *Hand Clapping for myself*.My name is Sabet, I am a female author who loves to play online game (too much). So that will be the main reason why I want to write a Game Novel, and boom! here we got LAST SHELTER ONLINE.My nationality is Indonesia, but currently I am active as a college student in number one Engineering Campus in Thailand. Yes, I got scholarship! But sadly, I can not graduate on time due to COVID-19 pandemic. And the bad news is, my scholarship will be run out soon. So I need to work hard to pay my study and my life in abroad (I can feel the MC here). I wish that my novel can be loved and enjoyed by everyone, I wish that I can win this biggest competition of WSA 2022. In order to do that, your support is very important to me.Best Wishes, Sabet_Saga.
The idea is original but while usually i dont really care about grammar and punctuation,the sentences structuring makes it hard to read and immerse yourself in the story. But the biggest downside for me, and thats a personal opinion, is that your first few chapters should only be about the mc, yet all 4 of the first chapters have different 1rst person povs wich is one of the things i dislike the most since i like to immerse myself in the mc and i dont have split personalities.
A good novel! The spelling mistakes are minimal, the chapters arent too short, the update stabIlity is great, the world background is clear! The only downside is that privilege chapters are early.Overall, i recommend this novel for people to read :)
Best story ever.It's about a man who want to laze around and lose his purity after being reincarnated.A true good story unlike 70% of those on webnovel
translating quality is okay for the first 230 chapters but after that translation becomes inconsistent. either a change of translator or a laziness to change and conform to the former terms. quality can be said to be dropped since more sentence mistakes were made also after. world background is interesting. if quality further drops will be dropping this.
