great story and translation hope it doesn't get dropped
There is a chance you can tell what this story is based on if you don't it doesn't matter, the MC is believable and not too out there considering the events that have taken place.
Zombies fill the world
Monsters start to run amok
Will he survive this
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The theme of cultivation being a side concept for the 'BL' world is an interesting find, and I think the novel will rake in the views and attention it deserves if the prioritization remains that way (so that cultivation doesn't waylay the BL romance)!
Overall, the story is great. A characters possess the proper generic attributes dependent on their origin or race - humans possess clear, intrinsic or external flaws, similar to how spirits and demon characters have specific weaknesses or strengths. This is being portrayed nicely in the first four chapters, and outshines a good chunk of what you can find in Webnovel's archives.
The only thing I would suggest during later revision is to check whether the tense is appropriate for smooth transitions between instances and actions. From my opinion, the wording scheme can be altered between instances from past to present instead of strictly adhering to a single attribute to add variety, but the method you employed worked as well!
Good Work! This is definitely going into the library of someone who doesn't read BL novels!
I don't get why everyone in whole world hates MC, what he did to them. Being trash doesn't mean any street passerby can criticize the patriarch's son. And i don't think even servant's which are paid to do work have reason to not do it even if master is trash. Other things are great just explain this please
great story and would love to read more but the the use full paragraphs to say repeatedly say one thing is beyond annoying not to mention the lack of specific with guns. sniper is mentioned multiple times but what kind? auto? bolt? 50cal? overall its fine when free but doesnt get better for paid chapters.
This is a great story I just hope it doesn’t fall way behind considering your break was supposed to be over like two months ago. Love this book but I really hope you actually come back and update it by the 10th
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This is my first web novel and though I did not fully catch up I know for a fact that this web novel is going to create a new addiction for me to read more web novels
I was really hesitant befor starting this novel but this is amazing, thanks to the Limited Free Reading event I completed more than 150 chapters and OH BOY that was super fun. I don't know how but I really liked the MC and his interaction with other characters and the fight and action scenes and power levels. I really liked the author's take on the practical exam arc(which is pretty boring in most of the webnovels) it was generic but still refreshing to me. I am really excited what the future of the MC holds and please PLEASE PLEASE Don't drop or Drag the story or make it typical Harem. All the best dear author [img=recommend] Hoping for the best.
I can't wait for more!! I love this book so much and its so unique! Thank you! ☺
book has loads of potential, just needs more chapters! glad your not repeating all the skills and such in the newer chapters! keep up the good work.