Everything about this story is great.... aside from the plot with the mother. Even after 1200+ chapters the situation with the mother hasn't changed. He still hates her as much as he did in the beginning, all the while the mother and grandfather act as if she didn't abandon the MC for years on end multiple times. She only appears maybe once or twice every few hundred chapters and it's the same interaction between the MC and her. Every. Single. Time. She shows up, mc is still angry at her and doesn't spare her a second glance, then she butts into to just about every conversation the MC has not realizing that the MC is ignoring her. It's getting old.
Really interesting story so far. I like the idea that the mc cultivates on own and discovers new realms while dealing with the estrangement with normal people around him as he is transcending human limits. It also leads to many questions: Why can he cultivate, is there something about him that is special? Are there other beings out there, even humans, that can cultivate as well or is he the only one so far? I hope that those questions will be answered further in the story but for now it gives a certain sense of mystery.
i kind ofnwant to know what xalrov will do , his journey sounds exciting .knowing the author I know it will be a great book, the concept is great and the writing style is remarkable .can't tell you enough how much i loved this book .the first chapter hooked me , i couldn't just stop reading .woaaaah this was intense .
Nice story. Even though the typos are many, it is still good. I like the plot. The character is also kinda stubborn. I like it☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
The book does have a good premise even if it has been done before and the characters are likeable but I feel the writing lets the story down a bit. I don't feel any emotions when reading this book. My heart doesn't race while reading this nor do I dissolve in puddles of laughter. However I do like the premise and hope the author add more emotional elements to it. The author needs to create empathy between the readers and characters . Frankly there are a lot of opportunities to do so. When her mother died this is big emotional moment but the character doesn't cry or even miss her . After death outside the marraige and funeral arrangement that was her mothers wishes her daughter doesnt even talk about her. Most people want to reminisce about there loved ones. They woud at least say ," Damn, I really want to see that person again." The amnesia part is also great opportunity to create an emotional impact. Amnesia is very scary thing for people. You are suddenly surrounded by strangers and recognise anything. You could walk straight past the people and they used to be your best friends or lovers but you do't know that but that guy doesnt touch on anything except looking for his famiy. There are no emotional questions asked like I wonder what kind of famiy I have , I wonder if I will be able to see my friends again. These types of statement create emotional bonds with the reader because everyone has precious friends and family members they woud never want to loose.
Translation is dead
It's been more than 50 days without any new updates
Idk if it's due to webnovel or the translator
But a dead novel is a bad novel
So, there's no point reading
5 stars for having an army...........................................
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to slow to cultivate and boring.............................................................................................................
Hmmmmmmmm...... Too early to write much, but seems am gonna enjoy this... Lovely synopsis, wonderful Story, plots and twist In place!!!!!!!
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Holy **** this is bad. it's like reading a story written by a 12 year old who can only use the same plot device over and over. But as you are on this site you don't give a crap about that and will love it! try it out today, you piece of **** with low reading comprehension!
Hello all, this is just my personal bias review for this new work. I had found that the VR Game genre could use a little bit more twists, and an added fantasy element to spice things up a bit as we have so many of the other ones around. I am doing this for fun, and also the Spirity Award Contest, and based on the results shown here I'll determine whether to push the series further, it will be a long story with a deep plot, very interesting character with their own back story and goals, along with a secret treasure as they main goal for all who chases their desires. Please do enjoy, and if you love it, support with a review of your own :)