So, firstly, just so you know, author, I rarely give full 5-star reviews lol. If you look at the last few reviews I've done, I'm sure that you will notice that none of them have received full marks so that alone should tell you the entire story.
Synopsis: Very nearly done. It's well organized, precise, and tells what the story is about in full glory. No complaints there.
Story Development: Let's just say it assassinated all doubts I had going in~. The character is already a killer and while I was hoping you didn't follow the cliche route with an assassin that seemingly enjoys killing, it was still well done.
Character Design: Your descriptions were fluid and I had no issue trying to picture how your character looked. Some readers rather to imagine their characters, however, so it's also a matter of preference. But well done.
Finally, I can see why you're #1 in WPC #234 so far. This is coming from the current 5th place participant *cough*. I wish you all the best and keep up the good work. You're sure to win if you continue like this!
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Very good book overall (at least in the earl phase) ,good development, not many errors in the grammar as well,it's kinda like a system story but without one ,the book is interesting, can't wait for more.
The 50 free chapters have no plot development with it ending like the mc is behind where he started. the book is super super heavily focused on describing fight scenes in way to much depth way to often. the free chapters give no incentive to buy chapters as there feels like there is not plot to push forwards. good idea just way to little development
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i like the story from the beginning because it has a lot of potential to be great. mc is a dumb and a trusting and it is fine for me since other author tend to do it for Character development. It Started go haywire around 30+ Chapter that i was forced to drop it. suddenly killing innocent for no reason getting mad killing them and urging them to suicide. a sudden 180 degree turn around in attitude . i am not hook with the authors explanation since from the beginning he was introduced as a moraly upright person and it will take a lot for him to change like that . it was forced or the author lacked the right way to present to us readers that it does not click to me the right way and it irks me. Well according to his monologue he was told by the draconians that you gain power with contract souls . I cannot remember though it might be i have been skipping the other chapters since i am getting irritated to his stupidity or bored. Still i am putting this to library probably dropping it. reason? I am not quite sure how others see anti hero is but for me anti hero are those who still follow the HERO line but still has like a morality . it is hard to explain and there is a clear line for psychopath, psychotic or cold protagonist which i label them as Evil MC most of the time unless given an outstanding background or story execution.
kudos though for very good world development and interesting way explaining the stats.
there are other bad things such us being a little dumb, sudden change of mc attitude like being domineering as if he got mental issue. a little bit trusting and making very bad decisions. according to author this will improve and the product will be a cold hearted, vengeful and selfish protagonist . if that is your cup of tea i highly recommend it to you
Awesome novel. Your stories are always unique. On a different note, please update pantheon online please update pantheon online please update pantheon online
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the writing is not very good but the story is good.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I really like the young MC. He is lovable character who wants to help everyone around him. Who couldn’t fall in love with that? The story drops you into the action from the beginning and you feel like you are struggling right along with Einar. Well done!
Fast paced without seeming rushed, he can love forever so he isn't in a hurry and remains low key, gets various techniques, the plot is q bit scattered until chapter 20, but I guess that's what happens when the MC can live forever and time rushes by.