The story is very interesting .I wish you could upload more chapters with good content to read .It is very good to read .
why is sukuna not evil, and why are there no updates
Not a shameless author here. It's probably very early for a review but since I have nothing to do, I might as well write this. Also, I want to make things clear. If you go into "see who voted" and see my profile, understand that it's not that I'm shameless. I was scrolling down my novel page in admiration for my work when a guy voted, I got too excited and pressed the "vote". I know it's a minor issue but still.
Coming to the novel, I like to think that it's flawless but as an author as well as a reader I know it's not. The writing being one of the biggest flaws (which I'm trying to improve). Regarding the world-building, I believe it's more or less okay. If it appears bad, then it can only be attributed my not-okay writing. Understanding reader's dissatisfaction with main characters, I made the MC. He isn't a Gary Stu but he will get the job done. There are several social norms I would talk about in a sarcastic way. They are not to be taken seriously. Everything else is subjective. You like it? Good. You don't like it? Not good but I understand.
Is this gonna be like that fish novel but without body changing Into another species ? Also on another note...That kungfu novel got selected
Most people are probably going to think of the legendary mechanic but its pretty much nothing like that. MC transmigrated into a different world(not a game world) with a system. He absorbs herbs to gain points and uses those points to create mechanical soldiers. His cheat is giga OP and I see no harem or romance so far.
True demon that's all there is to say
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world background of this Novel is very good. it is recommended for all old and new reader... you guys would love it.
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It's like the author is 10 and has never got a Christmas present so he processed his sad live with this story where he gets everything for free. The characters are bad the story has 2 sides good and bad but nothing between. The Mc is like a child himself and I can say for sure that when I was 20 I was not like him. The dialogs needs improvement. I can understand that the author wants to create something that we haven't read a 100 times but to say hey I want it here you have it for free is not the best way in my opinion. After a month he is the strongest person on the continent, well I can life with that but than improve the background story and the plot
wow this is great stuff keep up the good work I am interested in see what he do next and cat girl people Haha
I wonder what other kinds of people exist in this water world [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Recommended, The Authors need to work on the updating of the chapters regularly. This serious will become famous and I wish all the very best to the Author.