"Thank you so much, Noona! Trying to read this novel with Google Translate has been really tough. The names keep getting mixed up. I had lost hope when the other translator stopped updating, but you've brought so much joy to my heart.
The main character is strong and unique, but not unbeatable. His power increases at a reasonable pace, and the other characters also develop distinct characteristics and contribute to the main story.
The murim world in the novel is incredibly well-designed, with the main character's failures, the betrayals of other sects, the fall of Mount Hua sect, and the presence of different and complex enemies.
The story is really touching, delving into the pain and guilt of the main character, along with his journey of revenge and forgiveness.
It's really long, soooo long... Sometimes I wish it would go faster. But it's one of my favorite novels, and definitely my favorite Isekai."
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Its blue balls system for ntr fans. Mc steals all the girls from others but never even finish the line for romance. Blue balls all cuckoo away.
it's good but, I want more. It feels like it ended without finishing the story.
Good job! Continue in the same spirit.
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Cons: Story Development has huge holes which can't be explained by plot armor. To give examples: MC is able to level super fast and has infinit resources but stops leveling without any reason - could be killed any time by some of the hidden forces. MC creates a clone and does not use it.
uploads are only one chapter at a time... we have seen better. World background is shallow but Overall setting is good.
pros: Charakter Design of the Heros and sidekicks are great. Currently the bad guys are not deeply developed. The just pop up with standard bad guy behaviour.
writing quality is good without any fancy wording. Easy to digest for non native speakers.
The MC can be described with 2 words: Cowardly, and Shameless. While neither of these are inherently bad, there needs to be some deviation from this, and I have yet to see him overcome these in any manner. On top of that, the update stability is greatly lacking. I will continue to read this, but it is on the bottom of my reading list at the moment.
Great book, fantastic world building, characters actions are congruent with their personalities.
Story is evolving and expanding and overall has been refreshingly unpredictable.
harem - chek/ ****** - chek / *** - chek / RAPE - CHEK / ntr -chek / milf - chek
Nice job man keep going i support this
but the writing need same work
Interesting. It’s a nice take on humanity, very philosophical not to mention humanity as a whole being the protagonist. That makes it all the more interesting. A must read.
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