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Vault Keeper Wang nodded.
"Shit." He cursed, Emilia was late for school.
"Oh…you know. She's single…you're single. Do you need my help?" (Melissa)
With the final set of explosives in place, the Shinobi leaped off of the bridge and onto the cliffside it was built into. They ran up the wall and returned to the thicket of trees they had sat in several days ago as they planned how to perform the mission.
i want more chapters this story has potential
I hope y’all like it, It’s my first real novel and I hope it gets popular
Read 41 chapters so far, and although the plot itself and the grammar are both good, the story is somewhat rushed, the dialogue is a little too long when it should be more spaced out, and the romance is really just not good at all, and is way too rushed without any actual development.
"A121… A122… A123…," Bae Seoyeon talked to herself and ticked off the checklist. After an hour of working, she looked at the time. It was almost 6 pm, "Seems like I have to continue these tomorrow."
I loved this,, only thing is, what was in that CD ..... Thank you for this Author-san.
It's hard to rate books that are still ongoing and there is no end in sight, but it's a pleasant story with slowly dripped mystery element nicely woven in there. I'd like to see the end game of this story, because my initial thoughts and fears of cliches were all shattered. Now I just...
This is not an awful story but not that exceptional either. The main character is ultra annoying, he has such a trash personality that its demotivating to read about him. I hope he grows up and change. The beginning in the underworld could be interesting but it just couldnt catch my interest. Overall, its readable if you have nothing else to read.
Thanks for inspiring me, I really appreciate it.☺️________________________________________________________________________________________________________________?
