Space travel:Crossing to an otherworldly continent

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just garbage, excluding the fact the novel goes premium at 20 chaps the english of the author is horrendous. the plot doesn't make sense and the novel doesn't spark any kind of excitement! you had plenty of time to make this good but you didn't, sorry if English isn't your first language.

If you create a MC that will make full use of a system, and show us his status, you better keep the scores consistent. And since you don't care to correct yourself, either for your MC status or your many grammar / orthography mistakes, then I will go back to other titles.Those are sometimes a bit more negatively minded, but at least they don't drive me nuts with major inconsistencies.

Haven't read it yet, but is this something like, my 3 beautiful wife's are beautiful vampires? Or the same universe, etc?

didnt read the story yet but just wanted to comment about how this novel ends with exactly 69 chapter .lol===============================

Man I wish you would continue writing ur novel, it was one of the novels i looked forward to updating everyday. Dont let those losers keep u down man, have a good one