enlightenedpupil
this novel cant even reach the mediocre standard just from chapter 1 you will see a huge and unexplainable plothole no matter what the author says in later chapters you cant cover this plothole
the mc is an ordinary person before he reincarnates
after he reincarnates he acts dumb and changes completely but nobody suspects anything?
then he thinks he became some medical god who can make a potion just because he knows some of the materials they used plus adding his own materials to "remove" the side affects with no fking recipe nothing
then he thinks that because the mc who will definitely kill him hasnt done anything to him yet he wont do anything back either
plus the quality of the writing is bad and the conversations like people with mental issues talking
all of this make the novel trash material
i didnt even bother to read the second chapter nor should you
The book idea is brilliant. it captured me at the first chapter
The MC is a strong willed person and the way you detail how he remembers each survival skill is lit.
you should check most of the grammar written though
I'm at chapter 30 and so far the novel has been great. Though I like the system I don't like the way skills are handled and their coldowns, they feel unnatural. I think they should just use mana and don't have coldowns. Just asking: In which chapter does the romance start?
Well it's only the first chapters, but the chapter title, well it was quite something. Thought the actual thing was different from what I was thinking and the story was quite astrounding. But I hope you update more frequently. I will be waiting for the rest to come
the writer is very good at describing the background of the incident, so the reader seems to be among the main characters. They have a unitary character. I really like this story cerita
Author Here; Supporting his work as usual. This is a promising novel for many, if you have a knack for a lot of fight scenes, game setting, rankings war, guild wars, kingdoms wars and even some wars that trascend the balance of equality and are transcendental, this novel is for you. Of course, while it may seem as though romance has no place in the novel from the start, I'd say it's quite romantic. Hmm, what again? well I don't have a proofreader yet but I can promise the errors are minimal, of course getting a proofreader is something I'm working on. If you are interested too you can contact me on discord.
Decent slice of life with heavy lewd undertones as far as I read (chapter 80) moved on from the novel at that point due to "plot" of yet again changing how the Mc acts dramatically, just not my cup of tea
I don't Evan know what to say becaus I have never done a review before nor have I Even read these book I am literally only doing this for exp but unlike those over exp wana be's I am a true elder of the exp sect for when I go for exp through typing comments or reviews atleast I make it intresting instead of just typing exp and if you are still reading this than I would like to thank you for your time and remember these wise words. there is allways time to read, just do it before you go to sleep
This book is a very interesting one, but with good writing and story development. It keeps me intriuged as I continue to read.
read to chapter 27 and i just stop, it is very boring, i dont understand the hype about it, no character design and world background whatsoever...
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well written, nice. In short, read it.
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