awesome .
I tried to justify giving this more stars, but i can't bring myself to. I will detail on this below.The quality of the writing is very poor, with words that are misstyped and mismatched that ruin the context.Characters don't stay in character and move from one attitude to the next, without any justification for the transition.The dialogues are poorly matched to the atmosphere and toopic, often using formal speech poorly, thus ruining the immersion. There are decent things as well, such as the world building, the theme and relationships, but too many things were copied from Culti online that it does not seem original.Same MC name, Same dragon name, Similar physique, same power system so far. It's just hard to apreciate something unoriginal that seems like a cheap copy.Coming back to the bad points, this novel could use a full rewrite and edit. Too many mistakes to recover by this point.
The braindeath logic of tbe proto was to much.
He literally has absolutely zero reason neither emotionally or Intellectually to love/miss and grief that much for his
,,wife(dream/life/hope/spirit destroyer),,
he was introduced as billions of years old, cold aloof god. but he talks way to much, and speaks many unnecessary things, 15 chapters in his 'cold' charecter is already breaking, and the story is already progressing to fast, I would be surprised is the emperor of the kingdom came down next chapter. two peerless beauties were generated out of no where,, just cause no doubt for smut reason which also brings the story down a bit. but the main problems as I said are. cold personality breaking, story moving way too quickly, and too much unessarcary speech on the mcs part. oh and too many random long drawn out info dumps.
Is there any use for the harem? Or is it like lord’s empire where harem is for some background and show? Please do let me know, so that i can continue to read with expectations. Thanks
Only three this week?
Is it just me, or does no one else see a synopsis?
Don't make a novel about a vampire if he's not going to act like a vampire.
Within the first 19 chapters he already obtained the ability to withstand sunlight and gains the same disposition [skin type] as humans.
Another thing is that it all seems too easy for him.
He literally starts off finding high-tier chests easily inside the Count's mansion, and later on they all become super convenient ways of strengthening himself or giving him exactly what he needs in his situation.
Overall, if you wanna see a vampire act like a human and get protected by "legitimate" plot armor in the form of treasure chests then you'll like this.
it's an intriguing story, I hope to see this story develop into a great piece of entertainment for all, the only thing I have a minor complaint about is editing the are some misspelled words and missing words but that happens to the best of us
Good story Xp ….......................................…............................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please continue the story of the honorable writer.
Honestly the dynamic of the relationship between the MC and her group is rather enjoyable. Instead of making everyone flock to the MC they have a girlfriend, as problematic as the relationship is proving to be. Beyond that the world has a good grasp of what's going on and as people come in more information is put out in an easy, understandable, and believable manner. I'm looking forward to see what else comes up from their trip plus how they deal with the problem they created. Thank you author and I am excited for more chapters.