I was expecting a webnovel but found real literature instead.
If the rest of the book lives up to the first 30 chapters then it'll be the best webnovel on this site, hands down.
another interesting novel
seems like a generic Cultivation novel you can meet at every turn, but still i would like to at least give it a chance.
but if it was stupid as expected, well dont even think about getting to the top 15/20 on the Power Ranking if this novel really got released
So far I really love the book and the main character. The only critique I have is the main characters and the minions level ups. The MC’s level ups seam a bit force like when they happen I would prefer them to happen mid doing something. And he look at it later rather than like when he wakes up or something. But I can live with it. Overall a really good book I really hope it can make it to well over a thousand chapters.
This is totally a bland story without even containing a little bit of comedy and romance. It has no originality of its own. There's no color in this story. Simple MC levels up kill mobs converts gold to real currency and then level up and this **** goes on and on. I fucking can't simply understand author's line of thought. He tries to make MC keep his identity hidden but at the same time he makes him a top player. He wants to earn as much as possible given the opportunity but at the same time he rejects all the offers to earn big. He gave MC 2nd chance(reincarnation) too early(three years) to do any good **** and then made him choose a ****ty progression class "Thief". Author contradicts himself too much. He forgets things. His naming sense sucks which destroys the mood of a readers immediately. He forgets what **** he has written. I'm too disappointed in this story. Moonlight sculpture is way better than compared to this ****ty story. Well there are lot of things I wanna know and criticize about but I have become too numb to ask or comment on anything written by all the authors who only know to write dumb things.
The most important point for now, in my opinion, is the quality of writing. There are many mistakes in the sentences, for example words that are missing ... It is difficult to understand the story in these conditions and it could discourage many. I therefore recommend reviewing your sentences before publishing the chapters.
Chapter 7 : TRANSFORMATION ULQUIORRA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
No joke : blem with the orthographe please correct it soon
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I adore this the only thing I find off putting is it's pacing BUT the pacing it has is more than made up for in quality if I had money I can say with confidence that I'd pay $1000 for 100 chapters just from the sheer enjoyment I gain even from "filler" chapters. I hope the author continues this art (^_^). I'm currently waiting till I have 10 or so chapters saved up because I personally enjoy binging this of course it's akin to a 10 min bing at MOST if it's the relatively more wordy chapter but the euphoria I gain makes my day.
Jajaja realmente el autor
These is a good book and i cant wait till you update and i hope you do soon❤you should continue making books cause you have a talent for it.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
from what I read so far your doing really good my personal preference would be the Mc focuses on agility and knives but it I am looking forward to how he will evolve and develop his future sight and powers
Many subplots happening all around, each intriguing so far. I wouldn't mind following the stories, just hope I could track all of them as it works. A Prince, An Emperor, A Queen, now a Man.