Hi - this is the author with a quick review. When I started writing this story I wanted to write something that was deep and impactful. I didn't want to just write a quick web story to get out an idea - but I wanted to make something that could stand on its own and that I would come back to after many years an still be proud of. So in this story - expect there to be a detailed and hopefully thrilling ride with characters you'll love, hate and fear. Please let me know what you think with a review and comments - thanks for reading!
i very much enjoy talking about psychological ideas and dispositions but when i get to far into the unknown i just dont like the outlandish guess's
in these types of debate/ conversation you have to start at a common point of agreement or it is a matter of opinion. though i have nothing against your or other peoples opinions, but blind faith can be a damaging thing.
good story !!! At the begining the MC is ruthless...I LIKE IT ....may the author can keep up with the story and won't change this side of the MC . goog luck and keep working !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Best story fantasy plot, I think it will be explosive. Writing quality is good with best story development and clear world background. I will support you author. Well done!
The story is filled with unnecessary details that doesn’t help with the story progression.I read till 67th chapter but the story hasn’t moved much. My advice to author would be to trim the unnecessary fillers and streamline the story a bit.
This story deserves 5 stars.Writing is good, no bad grammars. It is neat and cool story that deserves more outreach*love* *love* *love* *love* *love* *love*
It's actually a good novel and it's very interesting. Its very underrated it should get a vote and also contracted. I liked the weapons and the actions of the character its very interesting. I recommend readers to read this novel.
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Attractive setting as the MC is the little brother of Captain America, seems an antihero, looking forward for how the plot going, the system called "Conqueror Store" seems also revealing its ambition
the book is good it nice as it is filled with mystery and suspense that leaves u at the edge of ur seats
It's good at first, then it's become repetitive, repeating the same plot over and over, and side characters all become dumb; they can't even understand a situation. Mc is the only one with a brain, but again, his character should be a gangstar, but about 100 chapters later, he became an introverted teenager.
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