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some might think the mc has no personality I'm ok with that , after reading countless young master MCs this novel is a breadth of fresh air , a great novel to improve your mood
What it up with the writing? I swear that I spotted a spelling mistake, but it was fixed in a blink of the eye! Sneaky!
And whats up with the updating? So far it have been one update per day at minimum, how are you supposed to be able to keep that going? And you even publish more chapters some days!
Is the MC developing? I mean he gets lots of OP stuff, but how is he supposed to be able to use them? And there is a lot of foreshadowing for further developments, but can we trust them? So far it seems we cannot trust that things goes as they should at all!
Whats with the characters? They are totally awesome! Keeps distracting one from the lack of names!
And what is with the world background? There is totally no info dumps! Everyone loves info dumps!
Regardless of everything, this novel is a clear 5.0, no bias.
Very good story! Gripping intro and very nice flow of conversation. Rameez is a likeable character that I can kinda relate to. The interactions between characters is my favourite part of the novel.
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it looks good but can be improved specialy MC :) he is a little annoying and strory devolops so fast I think.
it looks good but can be improved specialy MC :) he is a little annoying and strory devolops so fast I think.
it looks good but can be improved specialy MC :) he is a little annoying and strory devolops so fast I think.
it looks good but can be improved specialy MC :) he is a little annoying and strory devolops so fast I think.
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I have been waiting so long for a translation for this novel. Unfortunately, great story ruined by poor translation. Please put some effort in your translation team, webnovel.
overall good novel, characters still need more depth, and fast updates (and harem XD)
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Good novel i liked it, no special reason just did
A worthy book by all standards. Grammar is incredible. Action scenes, out of this world. Character design is great. World background, acceptable and the story development is just on point. No info. Dumps too. I doubt there will be a critic here on the review page. There's just no fault.
SUCH AN AMAZING BOOK!!!! Exactly what i was looking and it’s update schedule is amazing
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