Hopefully, do not do like other fanfic, where they walk as babysitter of Issei or consider him his brother, helping him while the prostagonist himself, is not even strong, and before he is perverted, make him a better person.
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list the candidates for the harem, consider:
- sona.
- tsubaki.
- grayfia.
- "serafall.
- "ravel" phenex.
- yasaka.
- Gabriel.
- Kuroka.
- "· ingliv ·" leviatan.
- and all the milf you can.
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You have to have your Op powers, I do not understand why always in each fanfic, they complain at the beginning if they make it strong, then when it is weak or they defeat it fast, they complain that devilucho, an Op protagonist, so that he can focus on the relationships, because if it was strong you will no longer worry, but practice every day.
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keep it up.
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Good, so far but the pacing is slow but for a story like this I think that is good. It's easy to read and just well written in general. Curious to see what happens in the future!
Can't wait to see how this turns out. more please author san. ? I have to admit that cultivation stories are quickly becoming my .favorite guilty pleasure.
I really like the concept and plot line of this book, comparable to "Supernatural
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