Cool story with really decent update schedule. I cannot wait for this to finish so that I can binge it all in one go. Even fifteen chapters have hooked me on it and caused me to leave this review.
I'm honored to be the first review and I just want to say this is a very enjoyable read and I can't wait for more. I would vote but you know poor
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I mean it is just pure fire what can i even say. the system is perfect, the adventure is perfect, but i didnt like that one scene where he spent some divinity points to use hammer of the gods. Imo should have waited until he use miracle or wish
Honestly an amazing novel. It really gripped me, amazing character design and wonderful story development. I hope Author Dweia continues to use this amazing world in future novels.
Superb description and good food for the imagination
The prologue caught my attention and made me unable to tear my eyes away from this title
Story great from the start gives minimum background of the world and the character get a great character development as the story progresses. Only draw back is that after some 300 chapters you can't read the novel as it's full of grammatical error as it useless as we can't get the content of the story from that. Other than that it's a good story.
Its.... the characters have 0 personality, was expecting at least something considering this is a romance you know??mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm?mmmmmmmmmmmm
What next? Rearing pigs? or Cleaning bathrooms? .
I want to add another review because of the new arc the story is on. Honestly, it's really cool. It wasn't how i expected the story to turn out, but i'm liking it a lot. I'm just scared the author will drop it because... well I dunno, you get that feeling. He's doing bonus chapters for us and stuff... i just hope he isn't overworking and getting bored with writing
Author, don't feel down trodden your work isn't perfect but then again no book is perfect. Not everyone will like your story-telling but that doesn't mean you have to change your story to fit their exact desires. Create the story you like, obviously improve on some logistical points like timeline, history reference accuracy, mythology accuracy and grammar. I saw many comments disdaining the usage of hypnosis for kingdom building, personally it doesn't matter as long as it matches the MC's personality. It does seem a little rushed however. Damn this was a long comment, keep up the good work!
More please.