Great Novel I will probably do a lengthy review next time but for now i have a class coming soon. Anyways This here is my all time fav fantasy novel. No not because it has seggs( that's just a small part of the reasons") The way the story sets up is just brilliant. Idk if it's because I watch a lot of chinese martial arts drama when I was young but this novel is exactly how I imagine things to be. The Mc is exactly my type! maybe a bit too perverted but not to the point of being ridiculous and intolerable. He is serious when needed and takes good care of his harem. In a lot of harem stories the mc usually neglects his harem most of the time needless to say the plot rarely revolves around them But here there's a specific arc dedicated for each of the harem member. Not a quick grab like pokemon go. The characters are well fleshed out and their feelings are so relatable that I often forget they are fictional characters. This is probably the most realistic harem that we can get to say the least. Sorry my eng is not that good so I can't really describe well how I am feeling for this novel. All I can say is this is my fav. Again thank u author I know you are doing this for free and treat it as a part of your hobby but I really hope u can give your time and keep publishing chapters for me. I really want to support you but I am from a middle class family from a very poor country so my pocket money(i'm a student) would not be as near as 1/69th the amount that u need to buy some good food. I swear when I get rich I will donate u huge sums of money because after all You Are My Favourite Author of My Favourite Book. :) much love from Burma
I can't take this anymore. Qi made their talk but it was not replied at all. PLEASE NOTICE OTHER READERS THAT NOVELUPDATE WILL START TO RE-UPDATE SINCE TODAY, started with The Battle For the Cowl (5).
From the beginning to the ending this book is filled with chaos.
Plot: Very bad. Jumping from one style to another, no links between chapters, the only interest that i had “is the next chapter weirder?”.
No description of world, characters. Tons of unnecessary text, a lot of holes in plot and, of course, the worst setting i have ever seen.
High expectations because of top reviews here but... sigh..
For me, its just average, in bad terms, its lame :/
I was expecting a somewhat op but not overly op, just strong to stronger genre, cause you know, an ancestor, strongest hero/warrior, first pioneer, blablabla, he even was a somewhat like a soul in the sky watching everything formed, but nothing note-worthy advantage, it was like useless, i dont even know why the author introduced him like that. His personality is cringe for me, i was expecting a somewhat like Overlord vibes, but meh its so far from that.
Ofcourse i didnt really read everything, well because its locked starting chapter 40, didn't want to continue cause its boring for me, mostly because already 39 chapters but still didnt hooked me, but maybe, perhaps that later on it'll hit my spot if i continued and everything i questioned so far is explained, but i don't wanna waste coins and pass if im not sure.
I rarely leave bad reviews to a novel, i usually support everything because i understood them, especially those novels from originals, but because of too high expectations from the top reviews gave me, i'll be just honest with my review.
Well i understand that everyone has different taste, it just disappointed me, first with reviews, and second with what i read from early chapters, i really thought that there will be an Overlord vibes with the way i read it, some famous strong ancestor take over, some benefits and advantages with his state from the beginning, but nothing like that so far, he even struggled at the beginning fighting some mobs(supposedly), in my words, i dont like a grand opening but lame performance.
Great VR MMORPG novel to read... the story goes on flow, but the characters are few... it has a suspenseful backstory to wait for the upcoming chapters...
heyo crazy cronie here,review on 24/01/2021 @chap100review divided in: Short reviewLong reviewRatingsConclusionshort review: You came here for R-18? You are at the right place! You came here for A big harem? You are at the right place!long review: pros: 1) for those who came here for harem, yep this is for you.. this is really for you.. a very big harem novel2) r-18 scenes short but great! Different set ups so yeah readers will enjoy it!!3) some great comedy scenes, people might enjoy it... cons:1) first 25 chapters mc is "inconsistent". The start is not great!2) writing style becomes confusing (maybe only I am feeling this)3) This really isn't romance. There are few scenes but not really romanceRATINGS: writing: 8/10update: 9/10plot: 8/10characters: 8/10pacing: 8/10dialogues: 8/10entertainment: 9/10OVERALL: 4.1/5Conclusion:Read 25 chapters before thinking whether to continue this novel.World building I can't comment since it's only 100 chapters...A very enjoyable read for those who are searching for R-18 and a lil plot.To all the readers who enjoyed profane prince, this is a must for you!!!!
One guy said this book is for the faint of heart, i agree, at no point as far as i read did the main character win, he died several times and had his twin sister tortured to death, and then he continued to lose, i do not under any circumstance recommend reading this book ever unless you want to waste your time getting depressed, i still cant believe i wasted my time on this "story"