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I absolutely love it! I just don’t know about the update schedule. Other than that, I can’t wait for another chapter!Hajriejabxiaaodjebdoa
It’s better than most novels but wouldn’t say it’s amazing.There’s something off with Ren’s personality. It’s like he’s bordering a control-freak edgelord while trying to be a calm, composed, and relatable MC. The dichotomy should be the major personal struggle of the novel but the appeal of it just falls flat.Also if you’re expecting classic Alchemy, then you’d find little of it here. World building could also use a bit more flair as it is lacking and grammar could be better but that’s just a minor issue for me.
The main character is a Mary Sue, he hears of a problem, immediately knows how to fix it, just because, this leads to there being no stakes and a very boring read.I would not recommend it, as it has been written without any conflict. despite having such a good premise, it has been squandered by this author. :(
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literally trash....pure copy of MVS + 50% of previous chapters were being repeated + trash n timid mc
Es una buena historia, lleva en buena línea a los personajes pero hay partes en la que, aunque lo detalles son algo bueno, al detallar mucho algunas partes alarga la historia y deja un sin sabor mientras uno esperar que se vuelva interesante
########################################## I can't explain my feelings for these novels but 3 stars for this #################################
Boring.
The main character is forgettable with no character traits apart from 'poor weak orphan'. The supporting characters are even worse.
There are no hooks in this novel that make me want to read further an absolutely disappointing experience.
MC is just a simp and extremely naive he simply always goes on donating all the information he has free of cost and then gets lied to or gets betrayed, especially by girls, and his character doesn't even develop even after such setbacks, so the character development of mc is poor.
The story has a lot of potential but the author doesn't develops mc's character so it is good only when you read it to pass time.
The story is extremely well defined. It has nice world development and very good power system.
But still the mc's naive character without signs of development even after all the suffering irritates you alot, I personally feel that if author had developed MC's navie and simp character properly then this novel could have been in top rankings
The audacity is mind boggling
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MC is supposed to be a "veteran adventurer" but keeps making stupid decision like a 5 year old. MC was warned to not go beyond 3 meter, proceed to think "Eh, what can go wrong?", proceed to go beyond 3 meter, met some kind of disaster, almost died cause he's weak af, BOOM, plot armor. Now, does that look like someone who's supposed to be a veteran adventurer?? Like I get it's a different world, but that shouldn't make you STUPID.