1. I got a dig bick
2. You that read wrong
3. You read that wrong too
4. You checked
5. You smiled ...
It's good but when the transaction between MC and that one girl Sparrow went down it was a let down because he literally said that she can pay for his services like that was kinda lame but overall good just hope he becomes a savage at some points in the story and keep being solo
This right here is a master class in making people quickly lose interest. Paired with the chapters locking at chapter 10, and you get a practically unreadable novel. Honestly I recommend reading the first dozen paragraphs. It's the classic "everyone MC trusted is out to get him because he's a big old loser, while the girl he never looked at is the secret jade beauty for him," trope.
bro need more chaps, like a lot ;";;";";"!"!"!!"!";";";;"!*!!*!*!*
Great wuxia novel.
For Kylse, please dont misuse this space for your personal reason. This is a review section FOR the novel.
Why did the first and the second paragraph of your comment contradicted ? The first one was justified because you did care about the novel itself but why did you defend Qidian and thinks that all of us is stupid on your second paragraph ? isnt this what you call by selfish or personal reason that dont have a connection about thr novel itself ?
** : sorry english wasnt my first leaguage
The story flows from chapter to chapter which is refreshing. Enough details are given, so the settings are clear and easy to imagine. The characters are okay, and the MC is endearingly silly and entertaining. The descriptions and instructions of cultivation are also easy to grasp, which I appreciate since cultivation stories are a bit intimidating. Overall, I'm curious to how the MC will develop in the future. Nice!
This is a novel worth reading, and I personally am the kind who don't like romance but this novel.
It puts romance nicely and in a limit, and the limit and pace is so good that you never even think their was romance even once in the novel yet their is.
I had literally read the whole novel in about 10 hours.
This is probably the second or third book that I had had an interest in do much....
Go read it...
I would commend you for your fast writing skills and uploading skills if you were the original author who actually wrote this novel, sadly instead you became a thief who like to use other peoples work as your own, also known as infringement.
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Bro listen this was one heck of an adventure for me cuz first of all I'm not interested in these kind of novels but my friend insisted and boy was shocked like what an amazing story so far, you really represented the Webnovels writers potential with your work, keep up the gud work.#UPS gang❤️
The MC is too dumb, he lived in Earth who had a lot of technology and dont know anything about them. I would prefer a MC with knowledge about Engineering, Science and Computation.
Finally time to give my first shameless review.
You readers might have already noticed this but in case you didn't, I'll just let you know that I have no experience of writing online.
I used to write dramas for my school but they too were in a language that was very different from English.
But I am trying to improve my writing as much as possible. That's all I had to say in my defence.
Now when it comes to the story, you'll find several cases in the start where things just happen suddenly without much information and it might get confusing for a while but trust me when I say that by chapter 100 you'll get to know the reason why all of the things are so rapid for the MC and no it was not a mistake. I wanted the MC to fix this problem and I wanted him to be a confused mess. The story will take unexpected routes but when everything comes together it will be a spectacle to witness.
I won't ask you to be patient and wait for some hopeful rain shower. So if you find it not worthy of your time you can leave any moment you want.
Because at the end of the day it will be my fault that I couldn't entertain you.
Thanks for reading this<3
this book is amazing. it has a great start that draws you in and the author tells the story from the best perspective. I can not wait to see what happens next good job author keep it up.