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I am loving this novel so far. The writing quality is excellent and the story flows nicely. Although I have seen the “VR game in another world” type of novel before, this is by far the most unique and interesting. I am also enjoying how the MC is so OP but remains low key. I Can’t wait to se where this novel goes!
Oh god, It's boring. I actually kinda liked the idea of a grass mc who needs to cultivate to get stronger but this execution is just awful. the grammar isn't bad but I had to start skimming just a few chapters in cause it was so boring.
It is an amazing world of fantasy that comes alive with your words dear author. ? Hats off to you for writing such a top quality work. The amazing words that perfectly picture everything that is happening in the book come alive in front of us because of you. Mind you story gets interesting after the first chapter and it goes better and better after every chapter. ❤❤.The real feel of war, emotions behind the war, the torment and some fun everything is perfectly combined in your book. I really loved your book and want to recommend it to every Santa'sy lover to read. It is really great work. It is outstanding.❤❤❤??
The story is pretty flat, no detailed descriptions or any decent world building, apart from the names of villages and towns. The premise sounds intriguing at first, but it’s not. Mc is trapped for “mysterious reasons” (that’s literally the novels explanation) for a thousand years but then no time passed at all, it just makes no sense.
To anyone interested in a premise similar to this, but much better executed, I’d recommend “The Advanced Player of the Tutorial Tower” on WEBTOON.
can you give me a map of the area in your novel? I'm confused about the placement of the kingdom in human territory wilayah (Google Translate)
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The world feels real it's a very nice story to read.
The MC ambitions are realistic and normal. His "wife" is very cute and the women he gathers are beautiful and seductive.
His "brothers" are very realistic as well and he always has a motive to help out instead of the Kindness of his heart.
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good start and nice different approach with the systhem but the storry is full of holes and mistakes initself. author maybe reread your own storry
Interesting! I feel the comedic vibes and with vampires, what more do you need? I love the first six chapters and more importantly, I love the synopsis. Great job, Author