Nice, this is extraordinarily interesting, lol
I don't really know what to say
Just keep it up and try to make the updates frequent
Yeah least i forget, i just wanna ask
Is the Main character not too up for a weakling?
This book is superb... Story is quite good too... But review needs 140 letters.................................
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
A lovely and smooth-flowing read with no clichés, well, except for reincarnation. The story is stable, the magic theories are well thought out, and the protagonist is growing up fine. Most importantly, there are no arrogant young masters (at least for now).
My only complain is the shortage of chapters. How can 39 chapters satisfy me? At least 150 chapters are needed for a mouthful in one setting!
This is one of my favorite novels it is not hyped like it should be it has the best world building and plot building in a novel I would recommend this novel to anyone who sees my review!
(Could this novel have a 1000 plus chapters please! I would prefer a lot more!)
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Me apareció aburrida, o sea tienes un mundo de cultivadores a tu espaldas pero no haces nada.
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Everything about the book is good, i love reading it and the minutes used were not wasted. I’ll encourage everyone who love reading system and cultivation books to read this one[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
it started good but it became embarrassingly bad
This book is a good attempt at writing but there are plenty of mistakes that make it hard to understand what is being said. For instance, the pov changes are quite wonky and confusing, characters genders are mixed up, tons of tenses that are misused, and sentence structures that makes no sense. It's an admirable attempt at writing by not a non native English speaker. I know I wouldn't be able to write a coherent story either. Best of luck and keep improving! I'll check back in the future and update as needed.
Hey guys, I'm the author for this novel. As I am new to this, please give feedback as much as possible. I would like to thank you in advance for all the help that I may or may not get, depending on how this series goes. See you guys in the novel then, I guess.